Tiste Simeon, on 04 November 2018 - 11:17 AM, said:
I actually just downloaded it because I thought the blurb sounded cool. 3 pages in I realized I had read and given up on it before. For me it was too dense. Their is magic and science, Their are five elemental races, humans, I forget how many animal/human races, weird laws, ranks and societies. This is the kind of thing that normally interests me but it was too much and too badly intoed. You had barely absorbed one new word before introduced into the next.
Also seems derivative. How do you have so many ideas in one book? You apparently steal a few. The first 3 pages has Warhammer harlequin Eldar fighting the gnosis and anagogic sorcery from Bakkers books.