[High House Dark]

I like the improvements! (on the Draconus pic). I think darkening the BG definitely pushed it back, and overall, it's much better!! Great job.

[Corporal Nobbs]

Silchas Ruin
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[Abyss]

It's awesome, just 'inhuman' enough.

two comments - the color from his eyes bleeds into the surrounding skin a bit too much and something weird going on with the hair/skin beneath the ear, sort of looks like a secondary mini-ear.

[ForkassalOfTheInnerCircle]

^ What he said.

[A Demon Llama!]

Looks good, I think the ear is a too low and I imagined silchas with a stronger chin/ jaw myself. Maybe if you'd added collarbones, more neck definition to make him a bit less feminine. I don't really recall how he was described but I think his features are too soft here. Maybe a scar or something? Did he have any on his face? I like the colour mixture you used.

[Corporal Nobbs]

Worked some more on Silchas.
EDIT: From suggestions, I moved the mouth, added a kind of background and dialed down the pinkishness a bit.
I tried to lighten him further, but it lost to many details, and looked kinda stupid.
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This post has been edited by Corporal Nobbs: 15 February 2013 - 05:30 PM

[Abyss]

Even better!
More inhuman and striking, and I really like the blue veining beneath the skin and the shadow across the R side of his face.
Nice fix on the ear.
Skin may still be a shade too pink.

[High House Dark]

Ooooo, yes! Move the lips up though... I mean, for a human face, they're too low, and that's also making the chin look too small. I personally am ok with how 'pink-ish' he is, but maybe doing something with the background will help push him forward? He does sort of blend into it (hahah).

Overall, great work, I really like your take on him.

[Corporal Nobbs]

High House Dark, on 15 February 2013 - 04:29 PM, said:

Ooooo, yes! Move the lips up though... I mean, for a human face, they're too low, and that's also making the chin look too small. I personally am ok with how 'pink-ish' he is, but maybe doing something with the background will help push him forward? He does sort of blend into it (hahah).

He's not human though is he...

[Abyss]

Corporal Nobbs, on 15 February 2013 - 05:29 PM, said:

High House Dark, on 15 February 2013 - 04:29 PM, said:

Ooooo, yes! Move the lips up though... I mean, for a human face, they're too low, and that's also making the chin look too small. I personally am ok with how 'pink-ish' he is, but maybe doing something with the background will help push him forward? He does sort of blend into it (hahah).

He's not human though is he...

POINT!

[ForkassalOfTheInnerCircle]

Abyss, on 15 February 2013 - 05:42 PM, said:

Corporal Nobbs, on 15 February 2013 - 05:29 PM, said:

High House Dark, on 15 February 2013 - 04:29 PM, said:

Ooooo, yes! Move the lips up though... I mean, for a human face, they're too low, and that's also making the chin look too small. I personally am ok with how 'pink-ish' he is, but maybe doing something with the background will help push him forward? He does sort of blend into it (hahah).

He's not human though is he...

POINT!

The man got served.

[A Demon Llama!]

Yes. This is a lot frakkin better. I think it looks real good, don't have a problem with anything really and in my opinion you don't need to move up the mouth and the chin is good now. Human, but not quite. Probably favourite one you've done so far. Only thing I can say is that you could put more detail into the hair of your peeps so it doesn't look flat compared to the face and the one thing I don't like is the smudge on his neck light below his chin which kinda blends his neck into the background. Good shit.

[Illuyankas]

OK, now give him an afro. (I love it, it looks awesome)

[Corporal Nobbs]

A Demon Llama!, on 15 February 2013 - 06:17 PM, said:

Only thing I can say is that you could put more detail into the hair of your peeps so it doesn't look flat compared to the face.

Hate doing hair, it's something I really need to work on.
I'll chuck an afro on him just to practice.

[worry]

What color are his nipples?

[High House Dark]

ForkassalOfTheInnerCircle, on 15 February 2013 - 06:05 PM, said:

Abyss, on 15 February 2013 - 05:42 PM, said:

Corporal Nobbs, on 15 February 2013 - 05:29 PM, said:

High House Dark, on 15 February 2013 - 04:29 PM, said:

Ooooo, yes! Move the lips up though... I mean, for a human face, they're too low, and that's also making the chin look too small. I personally am ok with how 'pink-ish' he is, but maybe doing something with the background will help push him forward? He does sort of blend into it (hahah).

He's not human though is he...

POINT!

The man got served.

EDIT for not being relevant to the thread, and also to make worrywort's ridiculous response nonsensical, muahahahaha.

I still stand by what I had said though, so pthtphtphtphtph

This post has been edited by High House Dark: 16 February 2013 - 09:03 PM

[worry]

Take a chill pill, bro.

[Isa]

Looks great Nobbs, definitely one of my favorite takes on SR. I wonder though why you didn't opt for a darker background?

[Sergeant Rumjugs]

You realize I'm now lurking on the forums, hunting fruitlessly for a "MBotF Characters with Afros" thread, right?

And stalking all your posts for artwork, of course.

[Dolmen 2.0]

This is perfect, Silchus through and through!