Dolmen+, on 31 May 2013 - 06:15 PM, said:
Very nice. Like how the sculptures panning out. Very much an awesome sword sweep.
As for the image from NoK....a critical perspective draws my attention to the colour choices that blend really nicely. Composition wise maybe zoom in? the foreground needs more activity and definition. See if u can get all the action happening in the central third, you'll be golden.
If u have a grand scale ice monster in mind though disregard my advice and try mesh more pink into the centre for focal tension.
Hadn't planned anything for centre. Though it did worry me, I had thought about extending the rocky outcrop around and into the middle foreground, but couldn't really get it to work. So just left it.
Don't really want to zoom in, wanted all the action in the distance. But I agree centre really does need something. Maybe a single random rock?
OK, shifted somethings around, added stuff.
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This post has been edited by Corporal Nobbs: 01 June 2013 - 03:48 PM