Morgoth, on 17 December 2012 - 09:02 AM, said:
When that is said, there are aspects of the books that are starting to grate on me a little. I'm pretty sure the explenation for why magic doesn't work on water was repeated five times within the book. Soulfire also got several explanations. And he dwelled on the magic aspects of circles again and again. Not expansions on the previous explenations. No, almsot direct repetitions, and that's just for this one book. If I were to count for all 14 the number would be in the dozens. I understand that some things might be good to refresh between books, but I'm not a complete idiot and I've started to figure out the basic premises of his magic system after 14 books. As have most readers I imagine.
I think this is a by product of the way the series is told. It's slowly become more and more convoluted but I would claim that the first 6 maybe even 10 books in the series could have been read as standalone books. You can pick them up with out having read any of the other books in the series and you'll have a pretty good idea of what is going on and how magic works because Butcher throws in a paragraph about magic or monsters when ever it pops up for the first time in the book.
I suspect it is intentionally repetitiv and probably a request from the editor(s).
Morgoth, on 17 December 2012 - 09:02 AM, said:
In addition, it seems to me that despite continous stumbling, humbling and general crash course lessons in his own ignorance, Harry has gained very little wisdom. He is still the same rigid, hot headed and impatient man he was at the start. Sure he's gained quite a bit of experience in dealing with situations but he approaches them much the same. Same with people. The final scene with Mab stood out to me in that regard. Harry has been talking quite a lot in Cold Days about how fairies are nothing like human, and that their minds function very differently from ours. They cannot understand mortals he thinks several times. Yet he insists on judging Mab with human standards. Why should she have felt sad seeing Maeve die? She isn't human! For all Dresden knows, the emotions he so brazenly demands of her might be impossible for her to produce. His tendency to judge everything based on his fairly rigid morals becomes a little tiresome. I understand it is his character, but with some wisdom he might have given it some reflection.
Anyways, I loved the book. Let there be no doubt in that regard.
worrywort, on 17 December 2012 - 10:20 PM, said:
Hey, just be thankful that you didn't get another paragraph on how even though Harry respects women he still has a chivalrous streak he can't get rid of.
I found the inclusion of a discussion on gay rights between a fairy and Harry a lot more disconcerting. It was completely unnecessary and there was this slight under tone of Butcher/Dresden considering homosexuality amoral which, I don't care how old fashioned Dresden is, seems like a terrible position to hold when Dresden isn't Christian, Muslim or connected with any other kind of moral law. Quite the opposite really, what with him being a freaking warlock. Maybe Dresden is secretly a republican wizard.
It felt like Butcher wanted to show us how open minded Dresden is by having him speak out about a current topics in American politics but it came out less than spectacular.