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© Ian Cameron Esslemont 2008
BOOK I
Diaspora’s End
CHAPTER I
“The wise say that as vows are sworn, so are they reaped. I have found this to be true.”
Prince K’azz D’Avore
Founder of the Crimson Guard
The Weeping Plains,
Bael Subcontinent
1165th year of Burn’s Sleep
11th year of Empress Laseen’s reign
99th year of the Crimson Guard’s Vow
On the edge of a tiled rooftop, a small tent heaved and swayed under the force of the battering wind. It was nothing more than an oilskin cape propped up by a stick, barely enough to keep off the worst of the pounding rain. Beneath it sat a youth squinting into the growing murk of storm and twilight. Occasionally he glimpsed the ruins of surrounding buildings wrecked by the siege and, if he looked hard enough, he could just make out high above the rearing silhouette of the Spur.
What, he wondered, was the point of having a watch if you couldn’t see a damned thing?
The Spur towered alone, hundreds of feet above the plains. Local legend had it an ancient power raised it when the world was young – perhaps the warlock, Shen, occupying it now. Kyle knew nothing of that. He knew only that the Guard had besieged the rock more than a year ago and still wasn’t anywhere near to taking it. What’s more, he knew that from the fortress on its peak Shen could take on all the company’s mage corps and leave them cross-eyed and panting. He was powerful enough for that. And when a situation like that comes around, Stoop had told him, it’s time for us pike-pushers to stick our noses in.
Stoop – a saboteur, and old enough to know better. He was down in the cellar right now, wielding a pick in his one hand. And he wasn’t alone – with him worked the rest of the Ninth Blade alongside a few other men tapped by Sergeant Trench. All of them bashing away at the stone floor with hammers and sledges and picks.
The wind gusted rain into Kyle’s face and he shivered. To his mind the stupid thing was that they hadn’t told anyone about it. Don’t want anyone stealing our thunder, Stoop had said grinning like a fool. But then, they’d all grinned like fools when Stalker put the plan to Trench. They trusted his local knowledge being from this side of Seeker’s Deep, like Kyle himself. Stalker had been recruited a few years back during the Guard’s migration through this region. He knew the local dialects, and was familiar with local lore. That was to be expected from a scout, Kyle knew. The Guard had bought him from a Nabrajan slave column to help guide them across the steppes. But he didn’t know these southern tongues. His people raided the Nabrajans more often than they talked to them.
Kyle pulled the front fold of the cloak tighter about himself. He wished he understood the Guard’s native tongue, Talian, better too. When Stoop, Trench, and Stalker had sat with their heads together, he’d crept close enough to overhear their whispers. Their dialect was difficult to make out, though. He’d had to turn the words over and over before they began to make sense. It seemed Stalker had put together different legends: that of the ancient Ascendant who’d supposedly raised the Spur and started a golden age, and this current ‘Reign of Night’ with its ruins. Since then he and the others had been underground taking apart the walls and stone floor, Stoop no doubt muttering about his damned stolen thunder. Kyle whispered a short prayer to Father Wind, his people’s guiding spirit. If this worked he figured they were in for more thunder than they’d like.
Then there was the matter of these ‘Old Guard’ rivalries and jealousies. He couldn’t understand the first of it even though he’d been with the Guard for almost a year now. Guard lore had it his Ninth Blade was one of the storied, established a century before, and first commanded by a legendary figure named Skinner. Stoop put a lot of weight on such legends. He’d hopped from foot to foot in his eagerness to put one over the Guard’s mage corpse and its covert Veils.
The rain fell hard now, laced by hail. Above, the clouds in the darkening sky tumbled and roiled, but something caught Kyle’s eye – movement. Dim shapes ducked through the ceiling of clouds. Winged fiends summoned by Shen on the Spur above. Lightning twisted actinic-bright about them, but they circled down in a lazy descent. Kyle peered up as they glided overhead, wings extended and eyes blazing. He prayed to Wind for them to pass on.
Then, as if some invisible blade had eviscerated it, the leading creature burst open from chin to groin. It dissolved into a cloud of inky smoke and its companions shrieked their alarm. As one they bent their wings and turned towards the source of the attack. Kyle muttered another prayer, this one of thanks. Cowl must be on the roster tonight – only the company’s premier mage could have launched so strong an assault.
Despite the battle overhead, Kyle yawned and stretched. His wet clothes stuck to his skin and made him shiver. A year ago such a demonstration would have sent him scrambling for cover. It was the worst of his people’s stories come to life: fiends in the night, men wielding the powers of a shaman but turned to evil, warlocks. Then, he had cringed beneath broken roofs. Now, after so many months of sorcerous duelling the horror of these exchanges had completely worn away. For half a bell the fireworks kept up – fireworks – something else Kyle hadn’t encountered until his conscription into the Guard. Now, as though it was there for his entertainment, he watched a green and pink nimbus wavering over a building in the merchant’s district. The fiends swooped over it, their calls harsh, almost taunting, as they attacked. One by one they disappeared – destroyed, banished, or returned of their own accord to the dark sky. Then there was nothing but the hissing rain and the constant low grumble of thunder that made Kyle drowsy.
Footsteps from the tower at the corner of the roof brought him around. Stalker had come up the stairs. His conical helmet made him look even taller, elegant even, with the braided silk cord that wrapped it. No cloak this night – instead he wore the Guard’s surcoat of dark crimson over a boiled and studded leather hauberk, and his usual knee-high leather moccasins. The man squinted then sniffed at the rain. Beneath his blond mustache his mouth twisted into a lazy half-smile. Stalker’s smiles always made Kyle uneasy. Perhaps it was because the man’s mouth seemed unaccustomed to them, and his bright hazel eyes never shared them.
“Alright,” he announced from the shelter of the stairwell. “We’re set. Everyone’s downstairs.”
Kyle let the tented cape fall off his head and clambered over the roof’s broken tiles and dark gaps. Stalker had already started down the circular stairway, so Kyle followed. They were halfway down before it occurred to him that when Stalker had smiled, he’d been squinting up at the Spur.
The cellar beneath was no more than a vault-roofed grotto. Armed and armoured men stood shoulder to shoulder. They numbered about thirty. Kyle recognized fewer than half. Steam rose from some, mixing with the sooty smoke of torches and lanterns. The haze made Kyle’s eyes water. He rubbed them with the back of his hand and gave a deep cough.
A hole had been smashed through the smoothly set blocks of the floor and through it Kyle saw steps leading down. A drop ran coldly from his hair down his neck and he shivered. Everyone seemed to be waiting. He shifted his wet feet and coughed into his hand. Close by a massive broad-shouldered man was speaking in low tones with Sergeant Trench. Now he turned Kyle’s way. With a catch of breath, Kyle recognized the flattened nose, the heavy mouth, the deeply set grey-blue eyes. Lieutenant Greymane. Not one of the true elite of the Guard himself, but the nearest thing to it. The man waved a gauntleted hand to the pit and a spidery fellow in coarse brown robes with wild, kinky black hair led the way down. Smoky, that was his name, Kyle remembered. A mage, an original Avowed – one of the surviving twenty or so men and women in this company who had sworn the Vow of eternal loyalty to the founder of this mercenary company, K’azz D’Avore.
The men filed down. Greymane stepped in followed by Sergeant Trench, Stoop, Meek, Harman, Grere, Pilgrim, Whitey, Ambrose, and others Kyle didn’t know. He was about to join the line when Stalker touched his arm.
“You and I – we’re the rear guard.”
“Great.”
Of course, Kyle reflected, as the Ninth’s scouts, the rear was where they ought to be given what lay ahead. They’d been watching the fireworks for too long now and seen the full mage corps of the company scrambling on the defensive. Kyle was happy to leave that confrontation to the heavies up front.
The stairs ended at a long corridor flooded with a foot of stagnant water. Rivulets squirmed down the worked-stone walls. Rats squealed and panicked in the water, and the men cursed and kicked at them. From what Kyle could tell in the gloom, the corridor appeared to be leading them straight to the Spur. He imagined the file of dark figures an assembly of ghosts – phantoms sloshing wearily to a rendezvous with fate.
His thoughts turned to his own youthful night raids. Brothers, sisters and friends banding together against the neighboring clan’s young warriors. Prize-stealing mostly, a test of adulthood, and, he could admit now, there had been little else to do. The Nabrajans had always been encroaching upon his people’s lands. Settlements no more than collections of homesteads, but growing. His last raid ended when he and his brothers and sisters encountered something they had no words for: a garrison.
The column stopped abruptly and Kyle ran into the compact, bald-headed man at his front. This man turned and flashed a quick smile. His teeth were uneven but bright in the dark. “Ogilvy’s the name.” His voice was so hoarse as to be almost inaudible. “The Thirty-Second.”
“Kyle. The Ninth.”
Ogilvy nodded, glanced to Stalker, nodded again. “We’ll have the spook this time. Ol’ Grey’s gonna get Cowl’s goat.”
Cowl. Besides being the company’s most feared mage, the Avowed was also second in command under Shimmer and the leader of the Veils, killers of a hardened kind Kyle couldn’t have imagined a year before. He had seen those two commanders only from a distance and hoped to keep it that way.
Stalker frowned his skepticism. “This Greymane better be as good as everyone says.”
Ogilvy chuckled and his eyes lit with a hidden joke. “A price on his head offered by the Korelans and the Malazans too. Renegade to both, he is. They call him Stonewielder. I hear he’s worth a barrelful of black pearls.”
“Why?” Kyle asked.
Ogilvy shrugged his beefy shoulders. “Betrayed ’em both, didn’t he? Hope to find out exactly how one of these days, hey?” He winked to Kyle. “You two are locals, ain’t ya?”
Kyle nodded. Stalker didn’t. He didn’t move at all.
Ogilvy rubbed a hand over the scars marbling his bald scalp. “Well, I’ve been with the guard some ten years now. Signed on in Genabackis.”
Kyle had heard much of that contract. It was the company’s last major one, ending years ago when the Malazan offensive fell to pieces. All the old hands grumbled that the Malazan Empire just wasn’t what it used to be. And while the veterans were closemouthed about their and the guard’s past, Kyle gathered they often opposed these Malazans.
“This contract’s been a damned strange one,” Ogilvy continued. “We’re just keeping our heads down, hey? While the mage corps practice blowing smoke outta their arses. Not the guard’s style.” He glanced significantly at them. “Been recruiting to bust a gut, too.”
The column started moving again and Ogilvy sloshed noisily away.
“What was that about?” Kyle asked Stalker as they walked.
“I don’t know. This Ogilvy has been with the guard for a decade and even he’s in the dark. I’ve been doing a lot of listening. This company seems divided against itself – the old against the new.”
The tall lean scout clasped Kyle’s arm in a grip sharp as the bite of a hound. They stopped, and the silence seemed to ring in Kyle’s ears. “But I’ll tell you this,” he said, leaning close, the shadows swallowing his face, “there are those in this Crimson Guard who have wandered the land a very long time indeed. They have amassed power and knowledge. And I don’t believe they intend to let it go. It’s an old story – one I had hoped to have left behind.”
He released Kyle’s arm and walked on leaving him alone in the dark and silence of the tunnel. Kyle stood there wondering what to make of all that until the rats became bold and tried to climb his legs.
He found Stalker at a twisted iron gate that must have once spanned the corridor. He was bent low, inspecting it, a tiny nub of candle cupped in one hand.
“What is it?” Kyle whispered.
“A wreck. But more important than what is when. This is recent. The iron is still warm from its mangling. Did you hear anything?”
“I thought maybe something … earlier.”
“Yes. As did I.” He squinted ahead to a dim golden lantern’s glow where the column’s rear was slowly disappearing. He squeezed a small leather pouch at his neck and rubbed it. A habit Kyle had noticed before. “I have heard talk of this Greymane. They say he’s much more than he seems . . .”
Kyle studied the wrenched and bowed frame. The bars were fully half as thick around as his wrist. Was the northerner suggesting that somehow Greymane had thrust it aside? He snorted. Ridiculous!
Stalker’s eyes, glowing hazel in the flame, shifted to him. “Don’t be so quick to judge. I’ve fought many things and seen a lot I still do not believe.”
Kyle wanted to ask about all these other battles but the man appeared troubled. He glanced to Kyle twice, his eyes touched by worry as if he regretted speaking his mind.
In the light of Stalker’s candle Kyle could make out a short set of steps rising beyond the gate. It glittered darkly – black basalt, the rock of the Spur. The steps had been worn almost to bowls at their centre. He straightened, his hand seemed to find the grip of his tulwar on its own. Stalker shook out the candle and after a moment Kyle could discern the glow of lantern light ahead.
They met up with Ogilvy who gestured up and gave a whistle of awe. The tunnel opened to a circular chamber cut from the same rock as the steps. More black basalt, the very root-rock of the Spur. The dimensions of the chamber bothered Kyle until he realized it was the base of a hollow circular stairway. Torches flickered where the stairs began, rising to spiral tightly around the inside of the chamber’s wall. Squinting up, he saw the column slowly ascending, two men abreast, Smoky and Greymane leading. He stepped out into the center and looked straight up. Beyond the men, from high above, dark blue light cascaded down along with a fine mist of rain. The moisture kissed his upturned face. A flash of lightning illuminated a tiny coin-sized disk at the very top of the hollowed out column of rock. Dizzy and sickened, Kyle leant against one slick, cold wall. Far away the wind howled like a chained dog, punctuated by the occasional drum-roll of thunder.
Without a word, Stalker stepped to the stairs, a hand on the grip of his longsword. His leather moccasins were soundless against the rounded stone ledges. Ogilvy slapped Kyle on his back. “C’mon, lad. Just a short hike before the night’s done, hey?” and he chuckled.
After the twentieth full revolution of the stairs, Kyle squinted at curving symbols gouged unevenly into the wall at shoulder height. They were part of a running panel that spiraled with the stairs. Portions of it showed through where the moss and cobwebs had been brushed aside. It seemed to tell a story but Kyle had never been taught his symbols. He recognized one only: the curling spiral of Wind. His people’s totem.
After a time his legs became numb, his breath short. What would be there waiting for them? And more importantly, what did Smoky and Greymane plan to do about it? Just ahead, Ogilvy grunted and exhaled noisily through his flattened nose. The veteran maintained an even pace despite a full mail coif, shirt, and skirting that hung rustling and hissing with each step. Kyle’s armor, what cast-offs the guard could spare, chaffed his neck raw and tore the flesh of his shoulders. His outfit consisted of an oversized hauberk of layered and lacquered horn and bone stripping over quilted undershirts, sleeves of soft leather sewn with steel rings – many of these missing – studded skirting over leather leggings, gloves backed with mail, and a naked iron helmet with a nose guard that was so oversized it nearly rested on his shoulders. Kyle had adjusted its fit by wrapping a rag underneath. The combined weight made the climb torture. Yet when Stoop had dumped the pieces in his lap one morning a year ago he had felt like the richest man in all Bael lands. Not even their tribe’s war-leader could have boasted of such a collection. Now he felt like the company’s beggar fool.
He concentrated on his footing, tried to grimace down the flaring pain of his thighs, chaffed shoulders, and his blazing lungs. Back among his brothers and cousins he’d been counted one of the strongest runners, able to jog from sun’s rise to sun’s set. There was no way he’d let this old veteran walk him into the ground.
A shout from above and Kyle stopped. Distant blows sounded together with shouts of alarm. Weapons hissed from sheaths. He leaned out to peer up the inner circular gap but couldn’t see what was going on. He turned to speak to Ogilvy but the veteran silenced him with a raised hand. The man’s eyes glistened in the dark and he held his blade high. Gone was the joking, bantering mask and in its place was set a cold poised killer, the smiling mouth now tight in a feral grin. It was a chilling transformation.
The column moved again, steel brushing against stone in jerking fits and starts. Three circuits of the stairs brought Kyle to a shallow alcove recessed into the wall. At its base lay the broken remains of an armored corpse, ages dead. Its dessicated flesh had cured to a leathery dark brown. Kyle stared until Ogilvy pushed him on.
“What in Wind’s name was that?” he asked, hushed.
Ogilvy was about to shrug but stopped himself and instead spat out over the open edge. “A guardian. Revenant. I’ve heard of ’em.”
Kyle was startled to see that he’d unsheathed his tulwar. He didn’t remember doing that. “Was it … dead?”
Ogilvy gave him a long measuring stare. “It is now. So be quiet, and keep your eyes open. There’ll be trouble soon.”
“How do you know?”
“Like fish in a barrel.” He jerked his head to the rear. “Tripped the alarm, didn’t we? He’ll be here, or should be. Stay between me and the wall, hey?”
That sounded fine to Kyle and he was about to ask why when a burst of light flashed above blinding him followed by a report that shook the steps. Ogilvy snatched at the ringed leather of his sleeve, pulling him back from the open lip of the stairs. Wind sucked at him as something large rushed past down the central emptiness. A scream broke the silence. Kyle’s vision returned in time for him to see a guardsman plummet by down into darkness – the head and neck a bloody ruin. At his side, Ogilvy fumed.
“He’s pullin’ us off one by one! Where’s Grey?”
Kyle squinted up the hollow column; he could see better now that they were nearly at the top where moonlight and lightning flashes streamed down with the misted rain. A dark shape hovered. The Warlock, Shen. Guardsmen swung torches and swords at him. He stood on nothing, erect, wrapped in shifting shadows. His hands were large pale claws. One of those claws reached out for another man but was swatted aside. Shen snarled and gestured. A cerulean flash blazed. A guardsman crumpled as if gut-stabbed; he tottered outward, fell like a statue rushing past so close his boots almost struck Kyle’s upturned face.
Guardsmen howled their rage. Thrown weapons and crossbow bolts glanced from the slim erect figure. He laughed. His gaze shifted to the next man in line. Kyle leaned out as far as he dared, howled his own impotent rage and fear.
“Hood drag you down, you piece of inhuman shit!” Ogilvy bellowed, shaking his fist.
Above, Smoky leant out to Shen, his hands open, palms out at stomach level. Guardsmen lining the curve of the stairs spun away, raised arms across their faces.
“Heads up!” Ogilvy snapped and pulled Kyle back by his hauberk.
Flames exploded in the hollow tube of the circular staircase. They churned at Kyle like liquid metal. He gulped heated hot air and covered his face. A kiln thrust itself at him. Flames yammered at his ears, scalded the back of his hands. Then, like a burst of wind, popping Kyle’s ears, the flames snapped away leaving him gasping for breath. Through the smoke and stink of burnt hair and singed leather he heard Ogilvy croak, “Togg’s teeth, Smoky. Take it down a notch.”
They peered up, searched the smoke for some sign of the warlock. Churning, spinning, the clouds gathered as if drawn by a sucking wind and disappeared leaving an apparently unhurt Shen hovering in the emptiness. The warlock raised his amber gaze to Smoky, reached out a pale clawed hand. Kyle yearned to be up there, to aid Smoky, the only mage accompanying their party. It was clear to him now that they were hopelessly out-classed.
The arm stretched for Smoky. The warlock curled his pale fingers, beckoning. The men close enough swung at him but to no effect. Then the hulking shape of Greymane appeared stepping forward from the shadows and he thrust a wide blade straight out. The two-handed sword impaled Shen who gaped, astonished. The warlock’s mouth stretched open and he let go an ear-tearing shriek and grasped the sword with both hands. He lurched himself backwards off the blade. Before Greymane could thrust again the warlock shot straight up through the opening.
At Kyle’s side, Ogilvy scratched at his chin and peered speculatively to the top. “Well, that wasn’t so bad now was it?” he said with a wink.
Kyle stared, wordless. He shook his head, horrified and relieved. Then he started, remembering. “Stalker!” Searching the men, Kyle spotted him close to Greymane. They locked gazes then Stalker, his pale eyes bright against the darkness of his face, looked away.
Ogilvy sniffed and sheathed his sword. “Asked me to keep an eye on you, he did. Back down at the bottom.”
“I don’t need anyone to keep an eye on me.”
“Then there’s one thing you’ll have to learn if you want to stay live in this business,” Ogilvy hawked and spat into the pit. “And that’s accepting help when it’s offered ’cause it won’t be too often.”
The column moved again and the Ogilvy started up the stairs.
They exited from the corner tower of a rectangular walled court. The rain lashed sideways, driven as harshly as sand in a windstorm. The men huddled in groups wherever cover offered. Kyle fought to pull on his leather cape and ran to the waist-high ledge of an overflowing pond and pressed himself into its slim protection. Cloud-cover smothered the fortress like fog. The wind roared so loud together with the discharge of thunder that men side by side had to shout into each other’s ears to be heard. By the almost constant discharge of lightning, Kyle saw that the structure was less a fortress and more of a walled private dwelling. The central courtyard, the walls, the benches, the buildings, were all made from the living black basalt of the Spur. He was astounded by the amount of work that must have gone into the carving.
Only Greymane stood upright, his thick trunk-like legs apart and long grey hair whipping about from under his helmet. He motioned with his gauntleted hands, dividing the men into parties. Kyle wondered what he had done with the two-handed sword he had used against Shen, for the renegade now carried no sheath large enough for it – only a slim longsword now hung at his belt.
Smoky suddenly appeared skittering toward Kyle like a storm-driven crow. His soaked robes clung to his skinny frame. His black hair, slicked by the rain, gave his narrow face the frenzied look of a half-drowned rat.
“You the scout, Kyle?” the mage yelled, his voice hoarse.
Kyle nodded.
A shudder took the mage and he scowled miserably, drew his soaked robes tighter about his neck. The rain ran in rivulets down his face. He pointed to four men near Kyle. These men nodded their acknowledgement. Of them, Kyle knew only one: Geddin, a hulking swordsman Kyle was relieved to have with him.
Smoky leaned his mouth close to Kyle’s ear. Even in the rain, soaked through to the bone, the smell of wood smoke and hot metal still unaccountably wafted from the man. He pointed a bony finger to a wall fronted by a long colonnade entirely carved of the dark basalt: the roof, pillars, and dark portals that opened to rooms within. “We check out these rooms. You got point.”
Smoky caught Kyle’s reaction to that announcement and he laughed. The laugh transformed into a racking cough.
Kyle drew his tulwar and searched for intervening cover. Point. Great.
“Wait.” Smoky grasped Kyle’s weapon hand.
Kyle almost yanked free, but he remembered Ogilvy’s words and stopped himself. The mage frowned as he studied the blade. Kyle waited, unsure. Now what was the matter? The rain beat upon his shoulders. The mage’s grip was uncomfortably hot. Smoky turned to peer to where Greymane stood with his group. Kyle could see nothing more than a smear of shapes through the slanting curtains of rain. Smoky raised Kyle’s sword and arm, his brows rising in an unspoken question. Kyle squinted but could make out nothing of Greymane’s face or gestures. The mage grunted, evidently seeing some answer and fished a slim steel needle from his robes. He began scratching at the curved blade. “Anything you want? Your name? Oponn’s favor? Fire, maybe?”
Thinking of his own totem, Kyle answered, “Wind.”
The needle stopped moving. Rain pattered like sling missiles against Kyle’s shoulders. Smoky looked up, his eyes slitted, searching Kyle’s face, and then he flashed a conspiratorial grin. “Saw the histories on the way up too, aye? Good choice.” He etched the spiral of Wind into the blade. Incredibly, the tempered iron melted like wax under Smoky’s firm pressure. The sword’s grip heated in Kyle’s hand. Rain hissed, misting from the blade. The mage released him. What had that been all about? What of Wind? What was it his father used to say … ‘All are at the mercy of the wind?’
Kyle looked up to see Smoky, impatient, wave him ahead.
The rooms hollowed out of solid basalt were empty. Kyle kicked aside rotting leaves and the remains of crumbled wood furniture. He felt disappointment but also, ashamedly, relief as well. He felt exposed, helpless. What could he do against this warlock? His stomach was a tight acid knot and his limbs shook with uncoiled tension.
Ahead, the wind moaning and a mist of rain betrayed an opening through to the outside. He entered a three-walled room facing out over the edge of the Spur. The lashing wind yanked at him and he steadied himself in the portal. The room held a large wood and rope cage slung beneath a timber boom that appeared able to be swung out over the gulf. Rope led up from it to a recess in the roof then descended again at the room’s rear where it circled a fat winch barrel as tall as a man.
Smoky peered in over Kyle’s shoulder. He patted Kyle’s back. “Our way down.”
“Not in this wind,” grumbled one of the men behind Smoky. “We’ll be smashed to pieces.”
Scowling, Smoky turned on the Guardsman – perhaps the only one in the company shorter than him. “Always with a complaint, hey Junior?”
A concussion shook the stone beneath their feet, cutting off any further talk. Distant muted reports of rock cracking made Kyle’s teeth ache. Smoky recovered his balance, cackled. “Ol’ Grey’s fished him out!”
A second bone-rattling explosion kicked at the rock. Kyle swore he felt the entire Spur sway. He steadied himself. The hemp and wood cage rocked, creaking and thumping at its housings. Smoky’s grin fell and he wiped water from his face. “I think.”
“Let’s go back,” suggested another Guardsman, one Kyle couldn’t name. He’d used the company’s native tongue, Talian. “The Brethren say they’re worried.”
Pulling at his sodden robes, Smoky grunted his acknowledgement. Kyle eyed this unknown guardsman; brethren, the man had said. He heard the word used before. Something to do with the elite of the Guard, the originals, the Avowed. Or perhaps another word for them, used only among themselves? Kyle continued to study the fellow sidelong: battered scale hauberk, a large shield at his back, sheathed longsword. He could very well be of the Avowed himself – they wore no torcs or rank insignias. You couldn’t tell them from any other Guardsman. Stoop had explained it was deliberate: Fear, the old fellow had said. No one knows who they’re facing. Makes ‘em think twice, that does.
When they returned to the inner chambers, Guardsmen filled the rooms. It appeared to be a pre-arranged rallying point. Through the arched gaps between stone pillars Kyle watched the mercenaries converging on the complex of rooms. Men slipped, fumbling on the rain-slick polished stone. He turned to the short mercenary beside him. “What’s going on, Junior?”
Beneath the lip of his sodden cloth-wrapped helmet, the man’s eyes flicked to Kyle, wide with outrage. “The name’s not Junior,” he forced through clenched teeth.
Kyle cursed his stupidity and these odd foreign names. “Sorry. Smoky called you that.”
“Smoky can call anyone whatever he damned well pleases. You better show more respect …”
“Sorry, I—“
Someone yanked on Kyle’s hauberk; he spun to find Stoop. The old sapper flashed him a wink, said, “Let’s not bother friend Boll here with our questions. He’s not the helpful type.”
Boll’s lips stretched even tighter into a straight hound’s smile. Inclining his helmet to Stoop, he pushed himself from the wall and edged his way through the crowd of Guardsmen.
“What’s going on?” Kyle whispered.
“Not too sure right now,” the old veteran admitted candidly. “Have to wait to find out. In this business that’s how it is most of the time you know.”
And Just what business is that? Kyle almost asked, but the men all suddenly stood to attention, weapons ready. Kyle peered about, confused. What was going on? Why was he always the last to know? It seemed to him that they straightened in unison like puppets on one string. It was as if the veteran Guardsmen shared a silent language or instinct that he lacked. Countless times he’d been sitting in a room watching a card game, or dozing in a barracks, only to see the men snap alert as if catching a drum’s sounding. At such times he and the other recent recruits were always the last ready, always bringing up the rear.
This time Kyle spotted everyone’s center of attention as the open portal of the main structure on the far side of the roof garden. The men assembled along the colonnade, leveled cocked crossbows at that door. The front rank knelt and the rear rank stood over them. Kyle himself carried no such weapon as the company was running short.
“Here they come,” Stoop murmured.
Through the sheets of driving rain, Kyle made out a squad of men exiting the portal. Greymane emerged last. All alone he manhandled shut its stone slab of a door. The men jog-trotted across the abutting levels of gardens and patios. They threw themselves behind benches and stone garden planters that now held nothing more than the beaten down stalks of dead brush. These men and women covered the doorway while their companions jogged and skittered to another section of the courtyard. Stalker was among them, his own crossbow held high. Greymane brought up the rear, walking slowly and heavily as if deep in thought. Not once did he look behind. Oddly, wind-lashed mist plumed from the man like a banner.
The men reached the cover of the colonnade. As Greymane emerged from the curtain of rain Kyle saw that a layer of ice covered the man’s armor – icicles hung from the skirts of his hanging scaled armor. The Malazan renegade slapped at the ice, sending shards tinkling to the stone floor. Vapor curled from him like smoke. To Kyle’s astonishment, no one commented upon this.
Smoky closed to Greymane’s side. “Can’t take the cage,” he shouted. “The wind’s too blasted high.”
Greymane nodded wearily. “The stairs are no good. Shen saw to that.”
The solid stone under Kyle’s feet jumped as if kicked. A column cracked, splitting like a dry tree trunk sending men ducking and flinching aside. Rock dust stung Kyle’s nose.
“He’s awake,” Greymane said to some unspoken question from Smoky. “Be here any moment.” He turned to face the main building which was a long and low black bunker without windows or ornamentation. “Shen woke it before I could stop him, the filthy Warren-leech.” At Greymane’s side, Sergeant Trench waved to the men to spread out. They shuffled to both sides, crouching for cover, crossbows trained.
Smoky rubbed his rat-thin mustache while chewing on his lower lip. “Maybe we ought to get Cowl.”
Greymane’s sky-pale eyes flashed, then he rubbed them with a gauntleted hand sheathed in frost and he sighed. “No. Not yet.” He crossed his arms. “Let’s see what we’ve roused.”
Kyle almost spoke then. What was going on? These two seemed to have led everyone into a position with no escape. What was wrong with the stairs? Stoop, as if reading his mind, caught his eye and glanced to the back of the rooms. Kyle nodded.
He met Stoop at the last portal offering a view out on the courtyard. Before them, men crouched and leaned behind pillars, crossbows ready. They muttered among themselves in low voices, glanced with tired gauging eyes to Greymane. A few laughs even reached Kyle through the thunder and drumming of rain. He wondered whether half this mercenary business was simply how much indifference you could muster in the face of impending death.
Stoop gave him an encouraging grin, rubbed his hand at a thigh. “What is it lad? You look like your favorite horse just dropped down dead.”
Despite himself, Kyle burst out a short laugh. Great Wind preserve him! Was the man insane? “We’re trapped, aren’t we? There’s no escape and the Mocking Twins alone know what’s about to swallow us.”
Stoop’s brows rose. He pulled off his boiled leather cap of a helmet and scratched at his scalp. “Damn me for a thick-headed old fool. One forgets, you know. Serve with the same men long enough and it gets so you can read their minds.” He scratched at his fringe of brush-cut hair, crushed something between his fingernails. His eyes, meeting Kyle’s, were so pale as to be almost colorless. “Sorry, lad. I forgot how green you are. And me the one who swore you in too! A fine state of affairs.” He glanced away, chuckling.
“And?” Kyle prompted.
“Ah! Yes. Well, lad. You see Shen – the warlock – he’s dead now. Greymane finished him. But the thing Cowl and Smoky feared might be up here, is. Shen has been bleeding off its power all this time. Then he woke it when he died. It’s powerful, and damned old.”
“What is it?”
“Some kind of powerful mage. A magus. Maybe even an Ascendant of some kind. A master of the Warren of Serc.”
Ascendant – Kyle had heard the term a few times – a man or woman of great power? He knew his own tribal labels for the Warrens of his people. Some of the elders still insisted upon calling them ‘The Holds.’ But he didn’t know the Talian names. “Serc. What Warren is that?”
“Sky.”
It was as if the very wind howling around Kyle whisked him away into the air, tumbling head over heels while the roaring all around transformed into thunderous laughter. The booming filled his head, drove out all thought. He remembered his father saying that thunder was Wind laughing at the conceit of humans and all their absurd struggles. His vision seemed to narrow into a tiny tunnel as if he were once again peering up the Spur’s hollow circular staircase. Blinking and shaking his head, he felt as if he were still spinning.
Stoop was peering away, distracted. “Have to go, lad.” Without waiting for an answer the old saboteur clapped Kyle on the shoulder and edged his way through the men.
Kyle fell back against a wall, his knees numb. He raised the tulwar blade to his eyes. Water beaded and ran from the Wind symbol etched into its iron. Could it be? Could this being be one of them? A founder of his people. A blessed Spirit of Wind?
The rain was thinning, and Kyle squinted out at the surrounding walls of solid cloud. The Spur seemed to have pierced high into some other realm – a world of angry slate-dark clouds and remorseless wind. Even as Kyle watched, that wind rose to a gale, scattering the pools of rainwater and driving everyone down behind cover. Only Greymane remained standing, legs wide, one mailed arm shielding his face.
The door to the main house burst outward as if propelled by a blast such as those Moranth munitions Kyle had heard described. It exploded into fragments that shot through the air and cracked like crossbow bolts from the pillars and walls. Kyle flinched as a shard clipped his leg. One guardsman was snatched backwards and fell so stiffly and utterly silent that no one bothered to lower their aim to check his condition.
A man stepped out. Kyle was struck by the immediate impression of solidity, though the fellow was not so wide as Greymane. His hair was thick, bone-white, and braided – and lay completely unmoved by the wind. His complexion was as pale as snow. Folded and tasseled wool robes fell in cascading layers from his shoulders to his feet. Not one curl or fold waved. It was as if the man occupied some oasis of stillness within the storm.
His gaze moved with steady deliberation from face to face. When that argent gaze fixed upon Kyle he found that he had to turn away; the eyes seized him like a possession and terrified him by what they seemed to promise. For some reason he felt shame heat his face – as if he were somehow unworthy. The winds eased away then, their lashing and howling falling away. The churning dense clouds seemed to withdraw as if gathering strength for one last onslaught.
Into the calm walked Smoky. His sandals slapped on the wet stone. The magus – and Kyle held little doubt the being was at least that – watched the little man with apparent amusement. Smoky knelt and did something with his hands over the stone floor. Fames shot out from his hands along the wet rock. The line of fire darted forward very like a snake nosing ever closer to the entity. The magus watched all this with a kind of patient curiosity. His head edged down slightly as his eyes shifted to follow the flame’s advance.
Once the line of fire reached close to the magus’s sandaled feet, it split into two branches that encircled him. The being’s heavy gaze climbed to regard Smoky who flinched beneath its weight. The magus flicked the fingers of each hand and the flames burst outwards like shattered glass. Smoky flew backwards as if punched. He slid across the slick stone to lay at Greymane's feet. “That’s something you don’t see everyday,” Kyle heard the little man gasp. The magus was immobile but Greymane didn’t take his eyes from him to acknowledge Smoky. “We ought to call him,” Smoky said, pushing himself up.
The magus slowly raised his arms straight outwards from its body as if he were a bird about to take flight. Greymane took a breath to speak but stopped, glancing sharply to one side. Three figures, two men and one woman, all wearing wind-whipped dark cloaks, approached up the colonnaded walk. Three whom Kyle knew for certain had not come with the party. Greymane cursed under his breath. Smoky blew on his hands and kneaded them together.
The guardsmen edged aside for these three. The lead one Kyle knew for Cowl, hatchet-faced bearing blue curled tattooes at his chin and a thatching of pearly knife-scars at his neck. His seconds Kyle assumed to be Keitil, a dark-faced plainsman like himself though from a place called Wick. And Lacy, a wide solid woman with long, coarse dark hair woven in a single braid. All three were Veils, covert killers – mercenary assassins.
Greymane shot a look to Smoky who shrugged. “The Brethren must’ve gone to him.”
“I see you’ve made some headway,” Cowl called to Greymane.
The renegade hunched his shoulders and bit down any response. “I don’t want your kind of help,” he finally ground out.
Cowl waved a gloved hand. “Then by all means – bring it to a close either way. If you can.”
The renegade shifted his gaze to the immobile magus. “Your solution’s always the same. It requires no thought …”
“Something’s up,” Smoky warned.
The magus had bent his head back to regard the clouds above. He edged his arms up further, straight, hands open, fingers splayed. The thick wool sleeves of his robes fell away revealing the blue swirling tattoos of spirals and waves encircling both arms from hands all the way up to his naked shoulders: the assembled symbols of Wind.
“No!” Kyle choked out. A Spirit of Wind! He must be! A Blessed Ancestor – so claim his tribe’s teachings. Kyle lurched forward, opened his mouth to call out. A warning? A plea?
But Cowl shouted, “Get down.”
The magus stretched his arms high, reached up as if grasping the clouds. His hands clenched into fists then the arms snapped down.
A fusillade of lightning lashed the Spur. The punishing barrage seemed to drive the stone down beneath their feet. Men howled all around, true terror cracking their voices. Kyle fell as the rock kicked back at him. The continuous flashing blinded him. He lay with his arms over his head, shouting wordlessly, begging that it end.
The storm passed. Thunder crashed and grumbled off across the leagues of plains surrounding them. Kyle raised his head, blinking. He felt as if he had been beaten all over by lengths of wood. All around guardsmen dragged themselves upright, groggy and groaning. Incredibly, Greymane still stood. Kyle wondered whether anything could drive him from his feet – though the man was wincing and had his face bent to one shoulder to shield his eyes. Smoky lay motionless on the floor. Stoop was cradling the mage’s head and examining his eyes.
The magus had not to have moved at all; he stood now with his arms crossed.
Kyle crawled to Stoop. “Will he be all right?”
Stoop cuffed the mage’s cheek. “Think so. He’s a tough one.”
Kyle peered around; Cowl and his two followers were gone. “Where are the Veils?”
“They’re on the job.”
Kyle straightened up. “What do you mean? On the job?”
The old saboteur jerked his head to the magus.
“No!” Kyle pushed himself to his feet.
“Lad?” Stoop squinted up. “What’s that, lad?”
“They can’t. They mustn’t …”
Stoop took hold of Kyle’s arm. “The fiend’s a menace to everyone. We’ve had a hand in its rousing so we ought to—”
“No! He hasn’t threatened anyone.”
Stoop just shook his head. “Sorry. That’s not the way things work. We can’t risk it.”
Kyle pulled away and staggered out to the courtyard.
“Lad!”
As he ran, he could not help flinching with every step. He was certain at any instant lighting would blast him into charred flesh. But nothing struck. No lighting flashed, or one crossbow bolt flew – he also feared summary justice from the Guard for his disobedience. There were shouts; the voices garbled through the howling wind. The magus remained as immobile as any one of the other stone statues decorating the court. His heavy-browed head was cocked to one side as if he were listening. Listening for some distant message.
Kyle vaulted benches, crossed mosaics of inlaid white and pink stone. At some point he had drawn his sword – perhaps not the wisest thing to do while charging a magus or possible Ascendant. But he would have to stop to sheath it, and he couldn’t bring himself to throw it away either. Somewhere about lurked Cowl and his two Veils.
“Ancient One!” he shouted into the gusting, lashing wind. “Look out!”
The being uncrossed his arms. His crooked smile grew. Cowl appeared then at the man’s back: he just stepped out from empty air. Something unseen tripped Kyle sending him tumbling and sliding along the slick rock. Cowl struck with a blurred lashing of both arms.
Kyle yelled his frustrated rage. The world burst into shards of white light. He spun while an explosion boomed out. The noise echoed and re-echoed, transforming into a terrifying world-shaking laughter that roared on and on while he spun falling and tumbling, terrified that it would never end or that he would at any instant smash to pieces upon rocks.
Distantly, beneath the roaring, he heard a woman say in the Guard's native tongue, “So, what in Shadow’s smile was that?”
A man answered, “I’m not sure.”
“Did you connect?”
“Yes, surprisingly. Solid. At the end though – strange. Still, he’s gone for good. I’m sure.”
The woman spoke again, closer, “What of this one?”
“He’s alive. Looks like the sword took most of the blast.”
A hand, cool and wet, held his chin, edged his head back and forth. The woman asked, “Can you hear me?”
Kyle couldn’t answer. It was as if had lost all contact with his flesh. Slowly, darkness gathered once more: a soft furry dark that smothered his awareness. The woman spoke again but her voice was no more than a murmur. Then silence.
Pain jabbed him awake. A fearsome blazing at his right hand. Blearily, he raised it to his eyes and found it swaddled in rags. He frowned, tried to remember something.
“With us again, hey?” a familiar hoarse voice asked of him.
He edged his head up, hissed at the bursts of starry pain that throbbed within his skull. Stoop was sitting next to him. They were within one of the rooms carved from black basalt. A guardsman sat propped up against a wall beyond Stoop. Rags wrapped his face where one brown eye stared out, watching him like a beacon burning far off on the plains at night.
Kyle looked away, swallowed to wet his throat. “What – what happened?”
Stoop shrugged, drew a clay pipe from a pouch at his belt. “Cowl knifed the magus, or Ascendant, or whatever by the Cult of Tragedy he was. Lightning like the very end of creation like some religions keep jabbering on about came blasting down right then and there and when it stopped only the Veils were left standing. Not a single sign left of the bugger. Burst into ashes. You’re damned lucky to be alive. Left your hand crisp as a flame-cooked partridge though.”
Kyle peered at the dressings. Gone? Killed? “How could that be?”
With his thumb, Stoop tamped rustleaf into the pipe bowl. “Oh you don’t know Cowl like I do. Ain’t nothing alive he can’t kill.” Stood leaned close. “I told ‘em you was rushing in to do him in yourself. You know – make your name for yourself an’ all that. Something like ‘The Damned Fool with the Flaming Hand.’ Something like that. If you understand me.”
Kyle snorted a laugh then held his head and groaned. “Yeah. I understand. So, now what?”
Stoop nodded, clamped the pipe between his teeth. “So now we wait. The wind’s dying. Soon it will be safe enough to take the basket down. Our contract’s finished here now.”
“Did you succeed?”
Stoop’s grey bushy brows drew together. “Succeed? What’re you gettin’ at?”
“Stealing your thunder.”
The old saboteur sighed, took his pipe from his mouth and shoved it back into his pouch. “Now, lad, don’t get yourself all in a—”
“You knew some thing or some one was up here, didn’t you? All along?” He pushed himself up to one elbow, tried to get up on a knee. Stoop took him under the arm and pulled him upright. He leaned against the cool reviving wall. He pressed his left hand to his forehead to stop its spinning. “That’s why you came here in the first place, isn’t it? Why you took this contract – even though it was a strange one for the Guard?”
Stoop hovered at Kyle’s side, ready should he faint. “Now, no need to get all lathered up. Sure we suspected there was something worth our time up here. Otherwise we would’ve kept right on going. I’m sorry that you and he were both pledged to Wind.”
Kyle laughed. Pledged!
“That’s just unfortunate. That’s all. Why, us soldiers, we’re used to that. Half the men I’ve killed were sworn to Togg, same as myself. Doesn’t mean nothing, lad.”
Kyle shook his head. “You don’t understand.” How could anyone not of his people see that that being must have been a Wind Spirit itself. And they killed it. Yet how could Cowl, a mere mortal, kill a spirit? Surely that was impossible.
“Well, maybe we don’t understand. We’re just passing through Bael lands after all. S’truth. But I know there is one thing we understand and you don’t.” Stoop pointed to the west. “The guard is locked in a duel to the death with a great power, lad. A force that would lay waste to these entire lands to get to us.”
“The Malazans.”
“You’ve the right of it. Good to see that you’ve been paying attention. Now, power is power. We knew this warlock, Shen, was no way potent enough to whip up this sort of storm. Why, the entire weather of this subcontinent is affected. Your own plains are dry because of all the rains that are drawn here to run off to the eastern coast. We’d hoped it was something we could use in our war against the damned Malazans. But, as you saw, it was some blasted dreaming magus.”
“Dreaming?”
“Yes. Cowl says that all this – the storm – was summoned up and sustained just by his dreaming. Imagine that, hey?”
Kyle almost threw himself upon Stoop. You fools! You’ve slain a God of my people! But blinding pain hammered within his skull and he rubbed furiously with his one good hand at his forehead.
“You okay, lad?”
Kyle jerked a nod. “Could use some fresh air.”
Stoop took his arm to help him up the corridor. Outside, beyond the colonnaded walk, guardsmen were lounging on the benches and planters, talking, resting, and oiling weapons and armor. Stoop sat Kyle on the top ledge of a broad set of stairs that led down to a sunken patio, now a fetid pool of rotting leaves and branches. Clouds still enshrouded the Spur’s top and would remain for some time yet, Kyle imagined. But the edge was off the storm. Thunder no longer burst overhead or rumbled out over the plains spread out below. High sheet lightning flickered and raced far above, leaping and flashing soundlessly.
It could not be. How could it? It was impossible. Nothing after this, he decided, could ever touch him again. Yet something had happened. He studied his wrapped hand. It was numb of any feeling but for a constant nagging ache. They must’ve put some kind of salve on it. His tulwar, he noted had been sheathed by some considerate soul. Odd-handed, he drew it. The leather of the grip came away like dry bark in his hand. He brushed away the burnt material leaving the scorch-marked tang naked. The blade, however, remained clean and unmarred. The swirls and curls of Wind seemed to dance down its gleaming length. Turning it over, Kyle paused: the design now ran down both sides of the curved blade. He didn’t remember Smokey engraving both sides.
He touched the cold blade to his forehead and invoked a prayer to Wind. He’ll have to get it re-gripped. And he’ll name it Tcharka. Gift of Wind. And he’ll never forget what happened here this day.
“Have a rest,” Stoop advised. “It’ll be a while yet.”
Kyle let his head fall back to the stone wall. Through slitted eyes he spotted Stalker crouched against a pillar next to two guardsmen he didn’t know; one extraordinarily hairy and ferociously scarred; the other an older man whose beard was braided and tied off in small tails. Both were nut brown, as burly as bears, and reminded Kyle of the men of the Stone Mountains to the far west of his lands. The scout watched him with his startling bright hazel eyes while murmuring aside to the men. Exhausted, Kyle drowsed in the fitful weak wind.
Near dawn came Kyle’s turn in the basket. He and four others stepped in while the wicker, hemp, and wood construction hung extended out over empty yawning space. Eight guardsmen manned the iron arms of the winch. A gusting wind pulled and tossed Kyle’s hair as he now carried his helmet under an arm.
“How will they get down?” he asked a man with him in the basket as the crew started edging the winch on its first revolution.
The guardsman swung a lazy glance up to the men at the winch. A smile of cruelest humor touched his lips. “Poor bastards. Better them than us. They’ll have to come down the ropes.”
The wind rose as the basket descended close to the naked cliffs. It batted at the frail construction and pulled at Kyle’s Crimson Guard surcoat. Us, the guardsman had said. Kyle knew now he was one of them yet could never be one with them. He was part of the brotherhood but that same brotherhood had killed something like his God: one of his people’s ancestors, progenitors, guides, or protectors – perhaps even an avatar of the one great Father Wind himself. He knew now it would be easier for him to use the weapon at his side. To turn flat, unresponsive eyes upon death and killing. To do what must be done. He studied the men suspended with him over what could be their own deaths. Two watched the clouds above, perhaps searching for hints of the coming weather. Another peered down, curious perhaps as to where they might disembark. The last stared ahead at nothing. All their eyes, surrounded by a hatching of wrinkles, appeared flat and empty. These were the ones who could not be touched. Kyle felt drawn to them, sensed now that he shared something of the dead world they inhabited. He watched their sweaty, scarred, boiled-leather faces and felt his own hardening into that mask. He could stare at them now, at anyone dead or alive, and not see them.
Return of the Crimson Guard - CHAPTER ONE - OFFICIAL VERSION
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Posted 13 May 2008 - 05:33 PM
Thank you very much, Hetan
You are awesome!
You are awesome!
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Jump Around, on 23 October 2011 - 11:04 AM, said:
And I want to state that Ment has out-weaseled me by far in this game.
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FIRST!
Also Awesome!!
But, no Prologue? I'm almost hesitant to read the first chapter without it... hmm. No I'm not
*begins reading very very slowly*
Also Awesome!!
But, no Prologue? I'm almost hesitant to read the first chapter without it... hmm. No I'm not
*begins reading very very slowly*
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Posted 13 May 2008 - 05:50 PM
Much more than is in the excerpt at the end of NoK. Thank you Hetan 
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Posted 13 May 2008 - 05:52 PM
The prologue is in a seperate thread sillies
was a bit long to post them both together
was a bit long to post them both together
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Posted 13 May 2008 - 05:54 PM
I know, I was saying that the excerpt from chapter one in NoK is much shorter than this
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Posted 13 May 2008 - 05:55 PM
EEEEExcellent.
Running a mafia game and working... and now you lay this on me Hetan.
Trying to drive me insane? I think Mal has gotten to you already! Thanks!
Running a mafia game and working... and now you lay this on me Hetan.
Trying to drive me insane? I think Mal has gotten to you already! Thanks!
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Posted 13 May 2008 - 06:04 PM
MORE YAY!!!!!
- Abyss, EVEN MORE MORE YAY!!!!!!!!!!
- Abyss, EVEN MORE MORE YAY!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted 13 May 2008 - 06:05 PM
ok, wow
THis is awesome
So, am I the only one thinking that Bael is West of the 7C?
THe reference to "holds" souinds like FE, and they've crossed Seeker's Deep, meaning it's West of Genabackis...
Also, I now think that "Stonewielder" will be MT-style prequel...
THis is awesome
So, am I the only one thinking that Bael is West of the 7C?
THe reference to "holds" souinds like FE, and they've crossed Seeker's Deep, meaning it's West of Genabackis...
Also, I now think that "Stonewielder" will be MT-style prequel...
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Jump Around, on 23 October 2011 - 11:04 AM, said:
And I want to state that Ment has out-weaseled me by far in this game.
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Posted 13 May 2008 - 06:19 PM
So.
That powerful user of Serc isn't dead, would be my guess. Perhaps 'Kyle' will have a new mentor. Didn't they say in either GotM or MoI that neither the .... guys who ride quorls, nor the malazan empire, had a true adept of Serc in their history?
That powerful user of Serc isn't dead, would be my guess. Perhaps 'Kyle' will have a new mentor. Didn't they say in either GotM or MoI that neither the .... guys who ride quorls, nor the malazan empire, had a true adept of Serc in their history?
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Posted 13 May 2008 - 06:27 PM
That was Ruse
I think Kyle's sword is special now, imbued with the elemental's spirit/power
Also, Re: Smoky
He's obviously got Telas (duh), but he offered Kyle various types of protection--Wind (Serc), Oponn's favour (do they even have a warren?)
Could the CriGs have their own QB?
Also, I am now expecting at least ONE Claw vs Veil knife fight....
I think Kyle's sword is special now, imbued with the elemental's spirit/power
Also, Re: Smoky
He's obviously got Telas (duh), but he offered Kyle various types of protection--Wind (Serc), Oponn's favour (do they even have a warren?)
Could the CriGs have their own QB?
Also, I am now expecting at least ONE Claw vs Veil knife fight....
The problem with the gene pool is that there's no lifeguard
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Jump Around, on 23 October 2011 - 11:04 AM, said:
And I want to state that Ment has out-weaseled me by far in this game.
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Posted 13 May 2008 - 06:28 PM
Thanks a lot Hetan, and as brood says we've got more from the first chapter than in NoK. Really looking forward to finding out more about the CG and greymane now...
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Posted 13 May 2008 - 06:54 PM
So much goodiness in that chapter.
First subject, Esslemonts writting style and storytelling compared to Erikson. I didn't notice any great difference. I thought the chapter started out a bit shaky, there were parts of Kyles observations and the way Esslemont put together his sentences that seemed strange, but as they entered the keep it all came together and it was like reading any Erikson story.
I really enjoyed the portrail of the CriGs through Kyles eyes. The atmosphere and the tention as they go further and further into the keep, with skulking revenants and a deadly warlock waiting for them, was awesome. When the soldiers settle in the courtyard it felt like reading about american squads during WW2 or Nam. When Kyle sees Greymane and the soldiers come out of the cellars, greymane just walking slowly, seemingly ignoring the danger, I was thinking of Tom Berenger in Platoon.
All the little hints were great aswell.
There's a bole with the CriGs, must likely one of the brothers, which is awesome... he doesn't even seem insane.
Cowl is apparently an assasin first and mage second. That's pretty damn scary. I like Stoops opinion "there's nothing Cowl can't kill"
The first book is called "Disporas end" this coincides with it being the 99th year of the CriGs vow. I wonder if there's a significance in the one hundreth year of their war is coming up.
Greymane seems to be a scary mix between Temper and Dasem Ultor. It's not implied that he's now an Avowed so can we safely assume that he must either be:
A: An ascendant or on the brink of ascendancy. It could explain his ability to pierce the warlocks shield and his strength and pure awesomeness.
B: Powered by some blessing, worship, god - Stonewielder, it might mean he's linked to Obelisk like Toc was.
C: A mage. A hood damn warrior mage. Some kind of warren must be powering him.
First subject, Esslemonts writting style and storytelling compared to Erikson. I didn't notice any great difference. I thought the chapter started out a bit shaky, there were parts of Kyles observations and the way Esslemont put together his sentences that seemed strange, but as they entered the keep it all came together and it was like reading any Erikson story.
I really enjoyed the portrail of the CriGs through Kyles eyes. The atmosphere and the tention as they go further and further into the keep, with skulking revenants and a deadly warlock waiting for them, was awesome. When the soldiers settle in the courtyard it felt like reading about american squads during WW2 or Nam. When Kyle sees Greymane and the soldiers come out of the cellars, greymane just walking slowly, seemingly ignoring the danger, I was thinking of Tom Berenger in Platoon.
All the little hints were great aswell.
There's a bole with the CriGs, must likely one of the brothers, which is awesome... he doesn't even seem insane.
Cowl is apparently an assasin first and mage second. That's pretty damn scary. I like Stoops opinion "there's nothing Cowl can't kill"
The first book is called "Disporas end" this coincides with it being the 99th year of the CriGs vow. I wonder if there's a significance in the one hundreth year of their war is coming up.
Greymane seems to be a scary mix between Temper and Dasem Ultor. It's not implied that he's now an Avowed so can we safely assume that he must either be:
A: An ascendant or on the brink of ascendancy. It could explain his ability to pierce the warlocks shield and his strength and pure awesomeness.
B: Powered by some blessing, worship, god - Stonewielder, it might mean he's linked to Obelisk like Toc was.
C: A mage. A hood damn warrior mage. Some kind of warren must be powering him.
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Posted 13 May 2008 - 06:54 PM
OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH
Hello, soldiers, look at your mage, now back to me, now back at your mage, now back to me. Sadly, he isnt me, but if he stopped being an unascended mortal and switched to Sole Spice, he could smell like hes me. Look down, back up, where are you? Youre in a warren with the High Mage your cadre mage could smell like. Whats in your hand, back at me. I have it, its an acorn with two gates to that realm you love. Look again, the acorn is now otataral. Anything is possible when your mage smells like Sole Spice and not a Bole brother. Im on a quorl.
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Posted 13 May 2008 - 07:40 PM
hmm
no offence Apt, but it's "Boll", not "Bole"
Besides, he's described as a rather regular soldier...
no offence Apt, but it's "Boll", not "Bole"
Besides, he's described as a rather regular soldier...
The problem with the gene pool is that there's no lifeguard
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Jump Around, on 23 October 2011 - 11:04 AM, said:
And I want to state that Ment has out-weaseled me by far in this game.
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Posted 13 May 2008 - 07:43 PM
oh, another thing--when Kyle recalls the legends of the Spur, he says something about "An Ascendant, who established a Golden Age' and what follows now is "the age of Night" [/paraphrase]
signifcance/relation to the prologue?
signifcance/relation to the prologue?
The problem with the gene pool is that there's no lifeguard
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Jump Around, on 23 October 2011 - 11:04 AM, said:
And I want to state that Ment has out-weaseled me by far in this game.
