[Isa]

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She ended up looking a bit old. It's the first time I've tried drawing a child and it's tricky as hell, worse than men! Bless curves, is all I say.

Feedback much appreciated!

[Sinisdar Toste]

very sepulchral atmosphere, which i like. the only question i'd have about kettle is whether this is undead kettle, or living kettle, cuz i imagine undead kettle would look a little wizened

[worry]

I like this a lot.

[Abyss]

As a general comment, I like!.

If it's meant to be dead Kettle she should perhaps look 'deader'. Either way she might be a bit more dishevelled and obviously dirty. her shift and hair look fairly 'normal', and by the time we meet her in MT she's supposed to have been hanging out in the Azath yard for a least a few years.

[Ilona]

She looks pretty dead to me. But yeah, second what Abyss says about her general condition.

The atmosphere really rocks, though. And the Letheras city silhouetted in the background... Pwetty!

[Isa]

Sinisdar Toste, on 27 May 2011 - 05:59 PM, said:

very sepulchral atmosphere, which i like. the only question i'd have about kettle is whether this is undead kettle, or living kettle, cuz i imagine undead kettle would look a little wizened

*googles sepulchral* Thank you, that's what I was going for. She probably would look a little wizened, yes. I blame Shurq!

worrywort, on 27 May 2011 - 07:53 PM, said:

I like this a lot.

Thank you

Abyss, on 27 May 2011 - 08:09 PM, said:

As a general comment, I like!.

If it's meant to be dead Kettle she should perhaps look 'deader'. Either way she might be a bit more dishevelled and obviously dirty. her shift and hair look fairly 'normal', and by the time we meet her in MT she's supposed to have been hanging out in the Azath yard for a least a few years.

Thank you!
I will work on her appearance and push the undead look a bit further.

Ilona, on 27 May 2011 - 08:22 PM, said:

She looks pretty dead to me. But yeah, second what Abyss says about her general condition.

The atmosphere really rocks, though. And the Letheras city silhouetted in the background... Pwetty!

Noted, and thank you

[Sinisdar Toste]

Haha, i don't think i've ever seen the words 'i blame' unless they were followed by 'brood'

although in this case, shurq may indeed be the culprit.

[Dolmen 2.0]

It would seem I have reached my rep quota for the day, but this definately deserves all the rep I had, The setting, characterization and colouring work together. Its almost exactly what I thought of when I read kettles character.

If you want a bit of criticism Id say her hands and feet should be alot more worse for wear. clumps of dirt stuck on them to show her grave digging. Also I got the same feeling off her as I got from the girl in the grudge...You could let some of her hair fall over her face to make her..creepier.

This post has been edited by Dolmen: 12 June 2011 - 02:57 PM

[Isa]

Sinisdar Toste, on 28 May 2011 - 08:58 AM, said:

Haha, i don't think i've ever seen the words 'i blame' unless they were followed by 'brood'

although in this case, shurq may indeed be the culprit.

It would seem unfair to blame brood.

Dolmen, on 12 June 2011 - 02:56 PM, said:

It would seem I have reached my rep quota for the day, but this definately deserves all the rep I had, The setting, characterization and colouring work together. Its almost exactly what I thought of when I read kettles character.

If you want a bit of criticism Id say her hands and feet should be alot more worse for wear. clumps of dirt stuck on them to show her grave digging. Also I got the same feeling off her as I got from the girl in the grudge...You could let some of her hair fall over her face to make her..creepier.

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. The grudge hair would probably work wonders, I'll see what I can do.

This post has been edited by Isolde: 14 June 2011 - 08:12 PM

[Grimjust Bearegular]

Really excellent work on the skin here

[Isa]

Thank you