Posted 30 June 2006 - 02:11 PM
Starn -
Feel guilty as hell about not having looked in here as often as I should, and thanks for the kind words about Ran. The book was 92,580 words long, according to Wordcount. And believe me, I've been there at the place where you're using wordcount every couple of days, hoping that the number will somehow miraculously rocket while you're sleeping.
About description. I've gone down a long, hard road on this one myself. After fourteen years of writing professionally, I can only repeat a tired old dictum. Less is more. But the thing is, that less which ends up on the page is distilled from a bloody shedload of more. it's easy - easy - to write pages of description. But to boil down all that guff into one or two sentences, that's hard. Same with dialogue. Less is more. Don't explain things - the reader doesn't care what the hell is going on, or who's married to who, or what breed of horse the hero rides, or what colour his eyes are, as long as he keeps wanting to know what happens next. That's the key.
As far as Rol's home goes, well I live at the sea, and my father in law is an old fisherman. I simply drank Guinness with him, and listened to his stories about life by the sea in Ireland in the 1930's. It's that simple.
The story is the thing. Everything else is a bonus. Have a good, clear, gripping story in your head, and all the rest can go hang - you can fill it in later. I hate worldbuilding. I hang books around character, pure and simple. If the character wants to do something, I let him do it, and then figure out the plot ramifications later.
I hope that helps. Keep writing- like everything else, you have to practice to be worth a damn.