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Posted 29 April 2010 - 09:59 AM

Okay firstly I'm not looking to cause offence and I'm only slightly over halfway serious with this post.

But.... What the hell is up with Crokus or Cutter or whatever the hell he wants to call himself now. When he first showed up in Garden's I thought he was one of the best characters in the book and to a lesser extent in Deadhouse but it seems to me that his character has been getting progressively worse over the series and in Toll The Hounds he's just plain obnoxious.

I mean first of all he drops Scillara quicker than you can say "I'll call you tomorrow" Then he nearly kills one of his oldest friends and spends pretty much most of the rest of the book not even bothering to spend time with him. Then he starts an affair with Challice (why? who knows), where they both spend their time either having sex or acting as though someone has just died (Love's young dream).

He kills Vidikas which is the one thing in the book that Crokus does that I applaude and don't find irritating.

Then plans on going back to break off the affair with Challice but gets caught up in fighting the hounds (or rather watching other people do it) and then forgets? Apparently watching battles can in some rare circumstances cause amnesia (at least in Crokus case). So then he decides that the best thing for him to do is to leave immediately. Without so much as bothering to say goodbye to Scillara, Barathol or any of his friends in the city who haven't even seen or heard of him for years. Why the heck did he even bother coming back? He thought the city was in danger but did he do anything about that. Aside from killing Challice's husband (which Rallick could have probably done anyway) and inadvertantly causing her to pulp her brains out on the pavement what else did his homecoming achieve?

And let's not forget all the times he was so wrapped up in his own self-pity. Oh I'm a horrible person. Oh I've wasted my life. Oh nobody loves me.
I actually think him and Challice were made for each other now. Both broken, both despising themselve, and both mooning over the past. I wish he did find out she was dead if only so he might feel sorry for someone other than himself (bit of an exaggeration here I know).

To be honest I really hope he doesn't end up with Apsalar now because I think she could do a hell of a lot better than getting with this self-absorbed moron who can't even decide what his damned name is. (I'm not really that angry but I dig the passion) :D

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Posted 29 April 2010 - 10:10 AM

Quite honestly, I liked Crokus' passages in TTH. It was a homecoming he looked forward to in a naive, juvenile hope to get things back to normal. But it turns out the city he entered isn't the city he left, and he himself is a different person now. He left as a young lad hopping the rooftops. He came back and nearly killed a legendary assassin, banged the chick who rejected him before he left, AND linked killing her husband with avenging a friend.
We've got a lot of disappointment and illusions dispersing here. I think it was only in TTH that he started to mature as a character. He feels very, very human in his actions, the good and the bad.
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Posted 29 April 2010 - 01:17 PM

Well, Im finishing reread of TtH and I must say that Cutter is really interesting and important character. I like his transformation from naive teenager (Crokus), through naive "like-to-be" grown (I didnt protect you against six Imass, Im sooo pathetic) up into rather cynical adult who begins to solve his love problems (and hey, it is even more mature than killing half of Guild:)). Succesfully and without splash of useless words.
And in TtH he looks to me anything - but certainly not self-pitying. He is in psychic shit because thinks too much - didnt I hurt Scillara, didnt I hurt Challice, didnt I hurt Rallick (yeah, you did, but in other meaning). He finally threw his too strong care for everyone a simply began to act.
His trip to Darujhistan was simply last step in becoming mature. See that city didnt change much, but he did. See that his friends can live without him and vice versa, that he doesnt need to be at some romantical love all the time and live in world of legends, myths, beautiful poems, all wrapped in sweet lies.

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Posted 29 April 2010 - 02:05 PM

View PostUlrik, on 29 April 2010 - 01:17 PM, said:

Well, Im finishing reread of TtH and I must say that Cutter is really interesting and important character. I like his transformation from naive teenager (Crokus), through naive "like-to-be" grown (I didnt protect you against six Imass, Im sooo pathetic) up into rather cynical adult who begins to solve his love problems (and hey, it is even more mature than killing half of Guild:)). Succesfully and without splash of useless words.
And in TtH he looks to me anything - but certainly not self-pitying. He is in psychic shit because thinks too much - didnt I hurt Scillara, didnt I hurt Challice, didnt I hurt Rallick (yeah, you did, but in other meaning). He finally threw his too strong care for everyone a simply began to act.
His trip to Darujhistan was simply last step in becoming mature. See that city didnt change much, but he did. See that his friends can live without him and vice versa, that he doesnt need to be at some romantical love all the time and live in world of legends, myths, beautiful poems, all wrapped in sweet lies.


I agree he didn't hurt Rallick and Challice (at least not their feelings)
But I'm pretty sure he hurt Scillara a bit, when he just kinda left her when they got off the ship and went off into the city to do his own thing.

By the way did anyone else believe without a doubt that Challice would be dead by the end of the book? Because I could see that coming right from her first chapter.

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Posted 29 April 2010 - 05:55 PM

View PostKityhawk, on 29 April 2010 - 02:05 PM, said:

View PostUlrik, on 29 April 2010 - 01:17 PM, said:

Well, Im finishing reread of TtH and I must say that Cutter is really interesting and important character. I like his transformation from naive teenager (Crokus), through naive "like-to-be" grown (I didnt protect you against six Imass, Im sooo pathetic) up into rather cynical adult who begins to solve his love problems (and hey, it is even more mature than killing half of Guild:)). Succesfully and without splash of useless words.
And in TtH he looks to me anything - but certainly not self-pitying. He is in psychic shit because thinks too much - didnt I hurt Scillara, didnt I hurt Challice, didnt I hurt Rallick (yeah, you did, but in other meaning). He finally threw his too strong care for everyone a simply began to act.
His trip to Darujhistan was simply last step in becoming mature. See that city didnt change much, but he did. See that his friends can live without him and vice versa, that he doesnt need to be at some romantical love all the time and live in world of legends, myths, beautiful poems, all wrapped in sweet lies.


I agree he didn't hurt Rallick and Challice (at least not their feelings)
But I'm pretty sure he hurt Scillara a bit, when he just kinda left her when they got off the ship and went off into the city to do his own thing.

By the way did anyone else believe without a doubt that Challice would be dead by the end of the book? Because I could see that coming right from her first chapter.


Im not saying that he didnt emotionally hurt someone. But at least he stopped to make it "most important thing in the Wu". They will survive it. They´ll understand. That for me is sign of his maturity. But Im not saying that being cruel to friends is mature:) Just that Cutter began to see things in their real value. That he couldn stop unbound Imass. That he really became master dagger-wielder. That he is not debted to Challice...even Scillara. That he must move.

Yeah, I really liked his part in TtH:) And after weekend Ill summarize it and begin big thread about great Nimander :D
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Posted 29 April 2010 - 08:17 PM

In ThH he has three incredibly cool moments (vs Rallick, Vidikas and the Hounds). He does spend an unfortunate chunk of time in between wallowing in self-waah, but overall i like Crokus as a character. His evolution through the series has been logical and i thought well written by SE. Even the name change makes sense and it's not like we haven't seen other characters change their names to suit whatever (Sorry/Apsalar, Fid/Strings, Keeper/Urko, Dassem/Dessembrae, etc)

And he was right about one thing: Scillara could do much better :D

There's something right about him reuniting with Apsalar and the two of them riding of into the sunset and killing hundreds of people together.
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Posted 29 April 2010 - 08:56 PM

Toll the Hounds was the first book where I really liked Crokus, though only around the time he dropped his stupid nickname. In GotM he seemed too much like a conventional fantasy hero compared to more interesting characters like Rake, Baruk and the Bridgeburners, in DG his plotline was a distraction from the hardcoreness of the Chain of Dogs (though I enjoyed it a bit more on re-reading), and when he started calling himself 'Cutter' I just eyerolled.
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Posted 29 April 2010 - 11:09 PM

View PostKeithF, on 29 April 2010 - 08:56 PM, said:

Toll the Hounds was the first book where I really liked Crokus, though only around the time he dropped his stupid nickname. In GotM he seemed too much like a conventional fantasy hero compared to more interesting characters like Rake, Baruk and the Bridgeburners, in DG his plotline was a distraction from the hardcoreness of the Chain of Dogs (though I enjoyed it a bit more on re-reading), and when he started calling himself 'Cutter' I just eyerolled.


I think that's deliberate. Except in his case, the psychic scars are sticking and affecting him rather than just pat window-dressing. His love interest isn't a plucky young princess-in-hiding and they actually might not make it in the end, he's kind of failing (and flailing) left and right rather than stumbling through victories, he's confronting horrors and being truly horrified by them...it sticks with him into the next scene, and the next chapter, and the next book. It's not totally inverted 100%, but it's a neat pretty severe twist on the reluctant young hero finding himself arc.

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Posted 30 April 2010 - 12:46 PM

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Toll the Hounds was the first book where I really liked Crokus, though only around the time he dropped his stupid nickname. In GotM he seemed too much like a conventional fantasy hero compared to more interesting characters like Rake, Baruk and the Bridgeburners, in DG his plotline was a distraction from the hardcoreness of the Chain of Dogs (though I enjoyed it a bit more on re-reading), and when he started calling himself 'Cutter' I just eyerolled.
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Like I said I'm only really half serious with this this thread.

And I'm not at all opposed to characters developing and growing, in fact I whole heartedly support it. I still liked him at times in this book but I wish he'd had another story-line. Something more focused on him coming back to his old home and old firends and feeling that he doesn't really fit in any more. I mean they still had that but it was overshadowed I thought by the Challice story-line. I'd have preferred it if there had been more scenes with Crokus and Murillo or Rallick. I really didn't see the purpose of the Challice affair, and even Crokus didn't seem to know why he was having an affair with her. To me it added nothing to developing his character. You can argue it adds to Darujhistan not being his home any more and realising that Apsalar is "THE ONE". But I thought he'd already figured that out when he got together with Scillara. And the scenes with him reuniting with Rallick and Kruppe and the gang were far more effective at showing how much things had changed for him.

To me the only reason I could see for his affair with Challice was that it gave her the excuse to commit suicide. Some people in previous threads have said how they thought that that was poiniant and tragic. I agree that it was a little tragic but not that much. I found it more pointless to be honest. I don't mean becuase she didn't know the real reason why Corkus killed Gorlas. She reminded me a bit of Anna Karenina becuase I didn't have that much sympathy for her upon her suicide either, and beucase they're both characters who had a chance to be happy and build and great future for themselves but they were too obsessed with feeling sorry for themselves and mourning over what they'd lost. I thought her suicide was pointless becuase WHY DID SHE DO IT? She was free, her husband was dead, she could even possibly take his seat on the council and become one of the most powerful figures in the city.

Did she realise she was in love with Crokus and couldn't stand the fact that he would now be branded a murderer? If so than surely a better course of action would have been to help him escape or she could try to get any possible charges against him that might arise dropped. I can hardly see how her killing herself would help him. If she had misunderstood the message and thought that Gorlas had killed Crokus then I could see why she might if she really loved him that much (which didn't really seem to be the case to me).

Or did she think that Gorlas murder would lead back to her and they would execute her so killed herself to prevent that? I don't really think that's a vallid reason either because I'd think that such a charge would be very hard to prove and the only one who could possibly impilcate her would be Crokus and I'm sure she'd think she'd be able to maintain his silence one way or another.

I really don't see the reason for Challice's suicide or most of her story within TTH. The only way it might have had a purpose is if Crokus didn't find out that Gorlas killed Murillo and went and killed him becuase Challice eventually persuaded him. I think I'd have much preferred that.

I don't really think I hate Crokus but I do think he acted like a jerk for most of this book, and as it stands at the moment I'd rather he didn't end up with Apsalar. I hope maybe the whole jerk thing was just a phase and he''ll be better in the next installment so I can revise my opinion.
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Posted 30 April 2010 - 09:19 PM

well, it's pretty obvious that he is facing his own demons, questioning his decistions in life.
and he does feel regret about his attitude to scillara, to the point where he knows that it won't work with her, and it would be worse
if he came to try and explain that.
i don't think he acts out with a lack of compassion, quite the opposite i think.
and remember he went with apsalar to be with her, then she dumped him and he went to scillara and then he left, not knowing what to do, regreting his choices.

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Posted 01 May 2010 - 09:05 AM

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The only way it might have had a purpose is if Crokus didn't find out that Gorlas killed Murillo and went and killed him becuase Challice eventually persuaded him. I think I'd have much preferred that.


And that would be completely nonsensical. Crokus would of course find out. imo, challice killed herself for entirely narcissistic reasons.
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The only way it might have had a purpose is if Crokus didn't find out that Gorlas killed Murillo and went and killed him becuase Challice eventually persuaded him. I think I'd have much preferred that.


And that would be completely nonsensical. Crokus would of course find out. imo, challice killed herself for entirely narcissistic reasons.


I don't see why it would be nonsensical. Crokus and everyone only found out about Murillo's death because Gorlas sent the body to the Phoenix Inn, what if he hadn't? Or what if it showed up but Crokus didn't go back there. I would have quite liked it if Corkus had killed Gorlas without knowing what he did because then it would be as though he were unknowingly getting revenge on Gorlas, and I thought it would have been a clever way to crossover Crokus', Challice's, Murillo's and Gorlas' stories

And I'm not saying Challice's reason for killing herself narcissistic but I still don't understand those reasons. As I mentioned earlier I don't see how Killing herself would help her anymore than it would help anyone else in the book.
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Posted 09 May 2010 - 07:15 PM

View Postworrywort, on 29 April 2010 - 11:09 PM, said:

View PostKeithF, on 29 April 2010 - 08:56 PM, said:

Toll the Hounds was the first book where I really liked Crokus, though only around the time he dropped his stupid nickname. In GotM he seemed too much like a conventional fantasy hero compared to more interesting characters like Rake, Baruk and the Bridgeburners, in DG his plotline was a distraction from the hardcoreness of the Chain of Dogs (though I enjoyed it a bit more on re-reading), and when he started calling himself 'Cutter' I just eyerolled.


I think that's deliberate. Except in his case, the psychic scars are sticking and affecting him rather than just pat window-dressing. His love interest isn't a plucky young princess-in-hiding and they actually might not make it in the end, he's kind of failing (and flailing) left and right rather than stumbling through victories, he's confronting horrors and being truly horrified by them...it sticks with him into the next scene, and the next chapter, and the next book. It's not totally inverted 100%, but it's a neat pretty severe twist on the reluctant young hero finding himself arc.



Couldn't agree more. The cliche innocent little boy character stays young and innocent the whole story through, never being affected by the severity of what he's actually doing. When he drops Scillara to run into the city he's still not there yet, but reacting to Rallick, his unsatisfactory affair with Challice and Murillio dying I think is the world forcing Crokus to realize what he's truly become and come to grips with it, hence why he turns about and goes off with Spite because he's stopped denying to himself what he is and feels.

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I kinda love it when D'rek unleashes her nerd wrath, as I knew she would here. Sorry innocent bystanders, but someone's gotta be the kindling.
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