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Posted 18 December 2013 - 06:45 AM

On my first read-through now, I've been disappointed with the available summaries of the Malazan books. The Wikipedia entries are too short. The Malazan Wiki, Tor readthrough, and other sites have been far too ambitious in aiming for detailed summaries of each chapter of each book, leaving them both largely incomplete and even where complete inappropriate for quick reference. Some available summaries are written from the point of view of the end of the series, answering questions that aren't answered in book three and that I'd prefer to left guessing about. What would help me as a reader is a summary of roughly a page, trying to hit on the key events only and not to make every single connection explicit.

So what follows is an effort to do that. At first I tried to write it chronologically, but found it getting far too expansive. Instead I've organized it by groupings of characters and/or themes as appropriate. I've added a short list of what seem to me to be minor plots at the end. I will not be at all surprised if there are errors in my understanding of the text (I'm particularly unclear about the ending of Silverfox's story). I wrote the whole first draft from memory about two weeks after finishing the book and then briefly skimmed through to see if I'd missed anything major. I didn't want to page through to check details lest I add too much in the editing.

Please offer constructive criticism of this summary as well as the idea in general. Once y'all have helped me clear up the obvious mistakes (please especially check my description of the ending) and if the reception seems promising, I'll replace the very minimal summary on Wikipedia with this, and it can go on other sites as people want it to. If this seems a useful exercise, I will try to do the same for Deadhouse Gates and then the other books as I read them. Gardens of the Moon's summaries are generally better, I think.

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Dujek's 2nd army allegedly goes renegade with Whiskeyjack as second in command to join Anomander Rake and Caladan Brood to attack the cannibalistic and wantonly destructive Pannion Domin led by the Jaghut Pannion Seer.The White Face Barghast join as well after Trotts proves himself in single combat against the key chief's son, whose other children discover that the Barghast are descended from the T'lan Imass who didn't bind themselves to the Ritual of Tellann.

The first key battle is at Capustan where the Fener-worshipping Grey Swords stave off the brunt of the assault until Dujek and company arrive. Grey Sword Shield Anvil Itkovian takes the suffering of the tens of thousands of dead upon himself even though Fener's no longer available (after Deadhouse Gates) to relieve him, and the Grey Swords turn to the Barghast gods for new sponsorship. Caravan guard Gruntle becomes the Mortal Sword of Treach when his friend Stonny is raped and beaten at Capustan.

Toc the Younger emerges from the warren of chaos through a rent near Morn with the elder god Togg aboard to meet Onos T'oolan and Draconis's daughter Lady Envy and her pets, one of whom has the elder god and Togg's long-lost lover Fanderay aboard, and her Segulah swordsmen minions. Lady Envy's group attacks the Pannion from the south and drives the Seer to Coral, though not before Toc infiltrates the Pannion, earning torment by the Seer.

The Bridgeburners reach Coral first and blow their way into the city with Moranth help while Quick Ben with the Bonecaster Talamandas whom he rescues from a spirit trap and the support of Hood evades the Pannion poisoning of the warrens in order to trap the Seer. Whiskeyjack's lost in the battle when Kallor -- who as emperor tens of thousands of years earlier killed the whole population of a continent to preserve his legacy (the bodies form the imperial warren) -- betrays the attack when promised rank in the new House of Chains by the Crippled God, who is sponsoring the Pannion from behind the scenes. Anomander Rake submerges Moon's Spawn to crush the Pannion's redoubt in the end and Korlat, who has come to love Whiskeyjack, wreaks havoc on the Pannion forces.

The Mhybe -- Tattersail, Bellurdan, and Nightchill's host Silverfox's mother -- ages rapidly and thinks herself ruined when Silverfox appears not to love her, but Silverfox with Kruppe's help prepares the warren of Tellann -- seeded to fertility with Itkovian's memories before his body's failure of those killed at Capustan as well as the whole second Gathering of the T'lan Imass summoned by Silverfox-- to receive Togg and Fanderay as lords of the new beast warren.

The Pannion Seer turns out to have been driven to vengeance by his and his sister's entrapment when hidden by Tool's sister Kilava in the rift at Morn to protect them from Pran Chole's intended genocide of the Jaghut hundreds of thousands of years earlier. The seer uses the K'chain Che'malle Matron who was freed from the rift when he and his sister were put there to torture Toc and to generate K'chain soldiers. When Paran as Master of the Deck chooses mercy, Quick Ben helps free the Seer's sister from the rift. The Seer then cooperates in using his Omtose Phellack warren's ice to slow Burn's fiery destruction by the Crippled God. Togg returns Tool to the flesh in the body of the seer's soulless servant Anaster, as Toc Anaster.

Minor sideplots involve the Mott Irregulars, Bauchelain and Korbal Broach's necromancy and repeated drubbings by Quick Ben and the Bridgeburners,and the Segulah and Tool having to be repeatedly dissuaded from testing their prowess against one another by Lady Envy.

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Posted 18 December 2013 - 07:03 AM

Good idea but I think Memories of ICE needs a wintery not a summery lol.
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Posted 18 December 2013 - 08:15 AM

Its a good summary

That bit about Anaster and Toc is seperate from Tools return to flesh and blood. You have it reading as one merged event so perhaps it needs rephrasing?

Gruntle formed a following and Joined the battle against the Pannion under Trake. That needs some mentioning.

The Seguleh Motivations should be mentioned and the fact they were Thralls more than they were minions.
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Posted 18 December 2013 - 10:10 AM

View PostDolmen Weeks, on 18 December 2013 - 08:15 AM, said:

Its a good summary

That bit about Anaster and Toc is seperate from Tools return to flesh and blood. You have it reading as one merged event so perhaps it needs rephrasing?

Gruntle formed a following and Joined the battle against the Pannion under Trake. That needs some mentioning.

The Seguleh Motivations should be mentioned and the fact they were Thralls more than they were minions.


"Thralls" is exactly the word I was looking for. Thanks! I'm not sure what you mean by capital-M Motivations.

I mentioned Gruntle and Treach, but should add that Gruntle continued to help with the Pannion campaign through Coral.

Regarding Tool and Toc, you're absolutely right that I conflated those events, and thanks for noting it. I will correct it to note that "For restoring Fanderay to him, Togg put Toc's soul into the Seer's servant Anaster's soulless body and restored Tool's mortality and flesh."

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Posted 18 December 2013 - 12:16 PM

I don't really see the point of this exercise, but to be constructive I'd like to point out that you misspelled at least two names up there. It's Draconus with a u and Seguleh with an e. Es pecially the latter happens all the time on wikipedia and other sites and prevents me personally from taking those summaries seriously. I mean, if you can't be bothered to look up the spelling, how reliable are you going to be with the plot?
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Posted 18 December 2013 - 02:53 PM

View PostPuck, on 18 December 2013 - 12:16 PM, said:

I don't really see the point of this exercise, but to be constructive I'd like to point out that you misspelled at least two names up there. It's Draconus with a u and Seguleh with an e. Es pecially the latter happens all the time on wikipedia and other sites and prevents me personally from taking those summaries seriously. I mean, if you can't be bothered to look up the spelling, how reliable are you going to be with the plot?


A valid question, but I'd rather have a summary on Wikipedia that's 90% correct than one that's no better than the dustjacket. And of course anybody can very quickly correct the mistakes they note on Wikipedia. I often make small corrections there, but I rarely go to the trouble to write a whole article or segment of an article, and I think others feel the same way about getting over the initial hump. I'm just happy to have the chance to field this for accuracy here before it goes live in a place where the audience will be less attentive to mistakes like those you've noted.

Thanks for the spelling corrections. I'll check the whole dramatis to make sure that I haven't made any others before posting this elsewhere.

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Posted 18 December 2013 - 04:59 PM

Summaries are nice, but lets be real, if you just reread the books five or six times, then it's all pretty much stored in yer thinky-brainz forever and you won't have to refer to a summary.
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Posted 18 December 2013 - 08:19 PM

I like it, but I would dispute parts of the summary. (though my memory is a bit hazy and could be innacurate)

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Toc the Younger emerges from the warren of chaos through a rent near Morn with the elder god Togg aboard to meet Onos T'oolan and Draconis's daughter Lady Envy and her pets, one of whom has the elder god and Togg's long-lost lover Fanderay aboard, and her Segulah swordsmen minions. Lady Envy's group attacks the Pannion from the south and drives the Seer to Coral, though not before Toc infiltrates the Pannion, earning torment by the Seer.


intead of describing the seguleh as minions, i would describe them as ensorcelled.
"Envy's group attacks the Pannion from the south and drives the Seer to Coral": They cleaved a path to Coral rather than driving the seer to Coral
Also I think Toc got captured rather than "infiltrating"

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Anomander Rake submerges Moon's Spawn to crush the Pannion's redoubt in the end and Korlat, who has come to love Whiskeyjack, wreaks havoc on the Pannion forces.

I think this would be better characterized as "Rake hid moonspawn underwater so as to stealthily strike the Pannion domin at the end".
Also while Korlat did attack, I think she was of of the several soletaken Tiste Andii who attacked from the air and the Pannion condors put up a good figh (so it was not a total havoc)


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The Mhybe -- Tattersail, Bellurdan, and Nightchill's host Silverfox's mother -- ages rapidly and thinks herself ruined when Silverfox appears not to love her, but Silverfox with Kruppe's help prepares the warren of Tellann -- seeded to fertility with Itkovian's memories before his body's failure of those killed at Capustan as well as the whole second Gathering of the T'lan Imass summoned by Silverfox-- to receive Togg and Fanderay as lords of the new beast warren.


I think the Mhybe just regretted her decision to birth Silverfox (but not just because Silverfox appeared not to love her.)
I am not sure these were Itkovian's memories. I think it was populated with Imass memories.

It is "beast hold" not "beast warren" and I am not sure it is the same as the one Silverfox populated.

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Burn's fiery destruction by the Crippled God

I think Burn is being "slowly" destroyed by the poisoning caused by the chaining of the crippled god to her (rather than the crippled god doing this directly)

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The Pannion Seer turns out to have been driven to vengeance

I think the Seer was driven by insanity (rather than the pursuit of vengeance)

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Posted 19 December 2013 - 04:48 AM

View Postnacht, on 18 December 2013 - 08:19 PM, said:

I like it, but I would dispute parts of the summary. (though my memory is a bit hazy and could be innacurate)

It is "beast hold" ... and I am not sure it is the same as the one Silverfox populated.


Thanks for the detailed feedback. Right on hold, and I may be wrong, but I think that these are the same place. http://forum.malazan...ass-beast-hold/ suggests that at least one other person agrees.

Thanks to all for your feedback. I will post this on Wikipedia now. If you notice any further infelicities, please feel free to correct them there. I hope that you all agree that going from a hopelessly inadequate 152 word summary to an arguably inadequate 626 word summary is an improvement. I'm going to work on Deadhouse Gates sometime soon, and will write up the other books as I read them.

I agree that on read 5 or 6 the problems go away, but sadly I rarely have time to do that much re-reading. The fact that I'm only on book 3 on my first read-through is clear testimony to that!
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