Posted 07 August 2011 - 03:28 PM
I like it, especially the haircut and the stunt double line, and that's the closest representation of how I picture the Imass flint swords I've ever seen. I reluctantly have to point out a couple of small almost unremarkable errors, though, like spelling Toc Tok, and, oh, I don't know, drawing him with two eyes even after calling him the one-eyed guy in the comic.
Hello, soldiers, look at your mage, now back to me, now back at your mage, now back to me. Sadly, he isn’t me, but if he stopped being an unascended mortal and switched to Sole Spice, he could smell like he’s me. Look down, back up, where are you? You’re in a warren with the High Mage your cadre mage could smell like. What’s in your hand, back at me. I have it, it’s an acorn with two gates to that realm you love. Look again, the acorn is now otataral. Anything is possible when your mage smells like Sole Spice and not a Bole brother. I’m on a quorl.