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#2 Guest_Djini_hades_*
Posted 05 November 2004 - 01:59 AM
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Originally posted by Bredis Vahne:
You really liked it? or are you just saying...The idea just kind of "popped into my head" I'm not terribly happy with the blurb itself, but we shall see
Put it this way... The idea that a character writes the blubs is so far a very strong contender for me... In spite of DiB's rather good blurb he done for me...
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Posted 12 May 2004 - 01:28 AM
I realise this is OT, but I just wanted to say you've given me a bit of a shock, Shin 
I chose the collective name "Weavers" for the wizards and witches in a childhood fantasy, which I hope to write someday. I'll get ony my knees and beg if I have to--just don't trademark it
I chose the collective name "Weavers" for the wizards and witches in a childhood fantasy, which I hope to write someday. I'll get ony my knees and beg if I have to--just don't trademark it
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Posted 15 April 2004 - 07:52 PM
Some praise for Shin's work
--(The) descriptive prose and narrative are easy on the eye and succeed in creating an atmosphere. (Malarion)
--thats realy good, wish i could write like that. (Pearl)
--I'm really enjoying your story (PUG)
--That is some good stuff! (Mort)
--There is a refreshing breath of imagination in the work (Gamet)
--good, excellent writting (The Shadowlord)
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--(The) descriptive prose and narrative are easy on the eye and succeed in creating an atmosphere. (Malarion)
--thats realy good, wish i could write like that. (Pearl)
--I'm really enjoying your story (PUG)
--That is some good stuff! (Mort)
--There is a refreshing breath of imagination in the work (Gamet)
--good, excellent writting (The Shadowlord)
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Youve never heard of the Silanda? Its the ship that made the Warren of Telas run in less than 12 parsecs.
#5 Guest_Djini_hades_*
Posted 22 October 2004 - 07:08 AM
My attempt at a blurb <250 words:
Book: The Fire Caller
Firecaller Blurb
When two thieves claim to know the location of the spell book of the greatest mage to have ever lived, Tanya, a young, but high ranking mage in one of the eight mage towers of Pith jumps at the chance of acquiring it.
The thieves unwittingly start a cascade of events that fulfills two opposed prophecies, of two ancient and secret organizations.
A Covenant and an Order, who have been waiting for the appearance of the one that will either destroy the land, or save it from an all consuming evil, soon realize it is the time they have waited for, for over two hundred years.
The Covenant believe this ‘savior’ known only to them as the Fire Caller, will be the weapon against evil, given to them by their god in their hour of need when evil threatens to take over the land.
The Order has been foretold in their prophecy that the World Eater will come to consume the world in fire, destroying everything, and its members are sworn to find and destroy it.
The race begins, and all the while, a demented mage is amassing an army of undead, dedicated to his evil god, with plans to invade the Kingdom of Sare and unleash the greatest horror ever seen since the dawn of time.
I think it might still need some work?
Book: The Fire Caller
Firecaller Blurb
When two thieves claim to know the location of the spell book of the greatest mage to have ever lived, Tanya, a young, but high ranking mage in one of the eight mage towers of Pith jumps at the chance of acquiring it.
The thieves unwittingly start a cascade of events that fulfills two opposed prophecies, of two ancient and secret organizations.
A Covenant and an Order, who have been waiting for the appearance of the one that will either destroy the land, or save it from an all consuming evil, soon realize it is the time they have waited for, for over two hundred years.
The Covenant believe this ‘savior’ known only to them as the Fire Caller, will be the weapon against evil, given to them by their god in their hour of need when evil threatens to take over the land.
The Order has been foretold in their prophecy that the World Eater will come to consume the world in fire, destroying everything, and its members are sworn to find and destroy it.
The race begins, and all the while, a demented mage is amassing an army of undead, dedicated to his evil god, with plans to invade the Kingdom of Sare and unleash the greatest horror ever seen since the dawn of time.
I think it might still need some work?
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Posted 02 November 2004 - 05:41 AM
hehe, i was simply rewriting your own blurb i wasnt able to read your book past prologue yet as the forum was down and im swamped in work.
these brief excursions onto forum are only thing keeping me sane
i will get through it soon though, when i have time.
i wasnt able to read your book past prologue yet as the forum was down and im swamped in work.these brief excursions onto forum are only thing keeping me sane
i will get through it soon though, when i have time.
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Posted 02 November 2004 - 02:59 AM
Djini dont mean to intrude but i was reading your two blurbs and thought i might have a go for a laugh just tell me to piss off if i am stepping on your toes.
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The Fire Caller
Two thieves claim to know the location of the spell book of the greatest mage to have ever lived. Tanya; a young, but high ranking mage in one of the eight mage towers of Pith jumps at the chance of acquiring it. Through their claim the thieves unwittingly start a cascade of events that fulfills the two opposed prophecies of two ancient,secret and deadly organizations.
The Covenant and The Order who have been waiting for the appearance of the one that will either destroy the land, or save it from an all consuming evil. Each realize it is the time of propechy fufilled, the moment they have waited hundreds of years for is upon them.
The Covenant savior known only to them as the Fire Caller will be the weapon against evil; given by their god in the final hour of need when evil threatens to consume the land.
The Order has long foretold that the dreaded World Eater will come to consume the world in an all consuming inferno. The Order are the last hope, sworn to find and destroy the worlds doom.
The race begins.
And in the far reaches of the world a demented mage is amassing an army of undead; dedicated to seriving an evil god from before time itself. With plans to invade the Kingdom of Sare and unleash the greatest horror ever seen since the dawn of time, his ultimate victory is drawing ever nearer.
Only one thing can stand in his way; saviour or the destroyer he is the worlds last chance for survival.
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The Fire Caller
Two thieves claim to know the location of the spell book of the greatest mage to have ever lived. Tanya; a young, but high ranking mage in one of the eight mage towers of Pith jumps at the chance of acquiring it. Through their claim the thieves unwittingly start a cascade of events that fulfills the two opposed prophecies of two ancient,secret and deadly organizations.
The Covenant and The Order who have been waiting for the appearance of the one that will either destroy the land, or save it from an all consuming evil. Each realize it is the time of propechy fufilled, the moment they have waited hundreds of years for is upon them.
The Covenant savior known only to them as the Fire Caller will be the weapon against evil; given by their god in the final hour of need when evil threatens to consume the land.
The Order has long foretold that the dreaded World Eater will come to consume the world in an all consuming inferno. The Order are the last hope, sworn to find and destroy the worlds doom.
The race begins.
And in the far reaches of the world a demented mage is amassing an army of undead; dedicated to seriving an evil god from before time itself. With plans to invade the Kingdom of Sare and unleash the greatest horror ever seen since the dawn of time, his ultimate victory is drawing ever nearer.
Only one thing can stand in his way; saviour or the destroyer he is the worlds last chance for survival.
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Posted 15 April 2004 - 07:41 PM
Book: Where Allegiance Lies
Description: The three Thrones of the Empire and the council of Weavers have grown content in watching their territories extend on all horizens. The budding empire now pauses to gather new strength after a series of draining conquests. The mysterious powers of the Weavers have often been deciding factor in the empire's conquests. Weaving, the newly discovered Art, is no more than a few decades old, and its' secrets are kept close by a shadow organization known as the Third Eye.
During this respite from battle, lives shuffle and reform as citizens adapt to new roles, and prepare for battles to come. For many citizens, soldiers and tradesman, such as Sjhe, Elrys,Ralon Thieral and Elith, the drift of the times has luckily (or unluckily) set their lives on paths towards the strange and unknown.
Meanwhile, on an island far beyond the sight of the Empire or the Third Eye, a Dreamer has a vision that will change the entire world.
Description: The three Thrones of the Empire and the council of Weavers have grown content in watching their territories extend on all horizens. The budding empire now pauses to gather new strength after a series of draining conquests. The mysterious powers of the Weavers have often been deciding factor in the empire's conquests. Weaving, the newly discovered Art, is no more than a few decades old, and its' secrets are kept close by a shadow organization known as the Third Eye.
During this respite from battle, lives shuffle and reform as citizens adapt to new roles, and prepare for battles to come. For many citizens, soldiers and tradesman, such as Sjhe, Elrys,Ralon Thieral and Elith, the drift of the times has luckily (or unluckily) set their lives on paths towards the strange and unknown.
Meanwhile, on an island far beyond the sight of the Empire or the Third Eye, a Dreamer has a vision that will change the entire world.
Youve never heard of the Silanda? Its the ship that made the Warren of Telas run in less than 12 parsecs.
#9 Guest_Djini_hades_*
Posted 02 November 2004 - 12:58 AM
quote:
Originally posted by Bredis Vahne:
_Shadows of Heaven_ (aka that crappy title)
_The city is in an uproar! They are coming, even now! Our Lord Jo'za is nowhere to be found, but rumors abound...
I fear for even my life, even as I write this... if the rumors are true _He_ is here.
If these demons can secure his infernal touch, what could remain apart from their wishes?
My lords, I fear for our people...
Those few valiant souls who journeyed to the shores returned with horrible tales... I, I cannot fathom to put them to ink...
I hear them now... They are within the city. The screams are coming closer even as I write this...
The sky... my lords it is beautiful. Saffron and Gold dance in the sky. Like the lightshows of the Ishymata ...._
That sucks but its all I've got...I'll make something cool later.
I suppose I could also say something about the plot, but where's the fun in that?
I quite like this idea: One of your Characters in your book writes the blub! Excellent! Might try it!
Would THIS make you want to read the book if you saw it as a blurb?
quote:
Even as I write this, on the eve of my plan coming to fruition, I have my doubts. What kind of monster am I? Or am I a hero as they say?
Unleashing this onto the land, with my thinly veiled justification that it will end the war? I fool everyone but myself; I do it so the name Trellcan will live on forever, even after my death.
And what risks do I take, that it will destroy itself and not roam the land forever after its deed is done? Is the legacy I will leave to ensure it is destroyed whenever it re-emerges enough to satisfy me that, even after I die, the engine of my enemy’s destruction is not turned against the land it saves?
Prophecy: When a demented fool who rambles endlessly suddenly gets a ‘prediction’ from his random mutterings right, they consider him a prophet, and record every word he utters from his foaming, drooling mouth and consider it a glimpse into the future.
Well, it doesn’t have to be just demented fools who can create prophecies…
#10 Guest_Djini_hades_*
Posted 02 November 2004 - 03:28 AM
quote:
Originally posted by Drinks in Bars:
Djini dont mean to intrude but i was reading your two blurbs and thought i might have a go for a laugh just tell me to piss off if i am stepping on your toes.
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The Fire Caller
Two thieves claim to know the location of the spell book of the greatest mage to have ever lived. Tanya; a young, but high ranking mage in one of the eight mage towers of Pith jumps at the chance of acquiring it. Through their claim the thieves unwittingly start a cascade of events that fulfills the two opposed prophecies of two ancient,secret and deadly organizations.
The Covenant and The Order who have been waiting for the appearance of the one that will either destroy the land, or save it from an all consuming evil. Each realize it is the time of propechy fufilled, the moment they have waited hundreds of years for is upon them.
The Covenant savior known only to them as the Fire Caller will be the weapon against evil; given by their god in the final hour of need when evil threatens to consume the land.
The Order has long foretold that the dreaded World Eater will come to consume the world in an all consuming inferno. The Order are the last hope, sworn to find and destroy the worlds doom.
The race begins.
And in the far reaches of the world a demented mage is amassing an army of undead; dedicated to seriving an evil god from before time itself. With plans to invade the Kingdom of Sare and unleash the greatest horror ever seen since the dawn of time, his ultimate victory is drawing ever nearer.
Only one thing can stand in his way; saviour or the destroyer he is the worlds last chance for survival.
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If we ever needed proof that blubs are better written by someone other than the author...
Until you've read what I've wrote (Particulary Chap 9) I'd hold off DiB in attempting to do a blurb...
So I take it you're a past Chapter 2 now (References to the eight towers)? I'm bloody DYING here with inpatience; waiting for opinions to start trickling...
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Posted 18 November 2003 - 01:53 PM
Book: A Faceless Shadow
Description: The Sword Champion of Gunabad remembered a time when that title meant something to him. The years had burdened him with regret and left him with an emptiness inside that would drive him to journey to Selidor, the holy land of the ancient and wise Larmothians. For Maldo, it was a simple search for answers, but the world does not remain undisturbed by the passing of such men. A chance meeting on an empty road, and a plea he could not ignore would change everything.
The fate of worlds can turn on one moment, where one choice will give rise to a voice that will grow to shake the world.
In the quieter places of the world, folk speak once more of wraiths, dark legends and old myths, and of a faceless shadow stretching from the barren northlands. But the rulers of the free nations of the War Alliance remain blind to the early stirrings of an ancient evil. Struggling to maintain the fragile peace, they remain absorbed in their petty games of hatred, power and influence, ignorant of the perils of a united North.
Yet that peace is shattered when the Emperor of Gunabad is assassinated and all the evidence points to Nerobor. Luckily, not everyone is convinced…
I adapted Gamet's version of this, since everybody thought it was better.
Soon to come...Book 2 - "The Champions of Carnage"
The Two-Faced Bastard
Description: The Sword Champion of Gunabad remembered a time when that title meant something to him. The years had burdened him with regret and left him with an emptiness inside that would drive him to journey to Selidor, the holy land of the ancient and wise Larmothians. For Maldo, it was a simple search for answers, but the world does not remain undisturbed by the passing of such men. A chance meeting on an empty road, and a plea he could not ignore would change everything.
The fate of worlds can turn on one moment, where one choice will give rise to a voice that will grow to shake the world.
In the quieter places of the world, folk speak once more of wraiths, dark legends and old myths, and of a faceless shadow stretching from the barren northlands. But the rulers of the free nations of the War Alliance remain blind to the early stirrings of an ancient evil. Struggling to maintain the fragile peace, they remain absorbed in their petty games of hatred, power and influence, ignorant of the perils of a united North.
Yet that peace is shattered when the Emperor of Gunabad is assassinated and all the evidence points to Nerobor. Luckily, not everyone is convinced…
I adapted Gamet's version of this, since everybody thought it was better.
Soon to come...Book 2 - "The Champions of Carnage"
The Two-Faced Bastard
Grumpy is only my middle name.
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Posted 09 November 2003 - 08:50 AM
hmmmm.
Book: Descend Lower
Description: In the sprawling metropolis of Chimera, humans rule the day, whilst dreams reign through the night. For centuries, corporeal and ethereal have held each other in uneasy check whilst outside their bubble of quarantine the world rages in nuclear war and from high up in the Visceral Mountains the immortal Noctournate observe the world with bloodthirsty scrutiny.
But the tense equilibrium of Chimera will soon be broken as the city receives its first visitor from Without since the legendary Artemis Terawl, the November Hero. Alexend Qin is an emissary, intent on finding �The Final Man� whom she has been searching for longer than she can remember. With the help of several companions she must wind her way through the labyrinth of Chimera and into the twisted wastelands beyond.
The first book of a duet, Descend Lower begins the tale of Alexend and her eternal quest for what she doesn�t think she can find.
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Short Story: Elegy
Description: Forthcoming
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Book: Descend Lower
Description: In the sprawling metropolis of Chimera, humans rule the day, whilst dreams reign through the night. For centuries, corporeal and ethereal have held each other in uneasy check whilst outside their bubble of quarantine the world rages in nuclear war and from high up in the Visceral Mountains the immortal Noctournate observe the world with bloodthirsty scrutiny.
But the tense equilibrium of Chimera will soon be broken as the city receives its first visitor from Without since the legendary Artemis Terawl, the November Hero. Alexend Qin is an emissary, intent on finding �The Final Man� whom she has been searching for longer than she can remember. With the help of several companions she must wind her way through the labyrinth of Chimera and into the twisted wastelands beyond.
The first book of a duet, Descend Lower begins the tale of Alexend and her eternal quest for what she doesn�t think she can find.
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Short Story: Elegy
Description: Forthcoming
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#13 Guest_fortrip_*
Posted 09 November 2003 - 05:39 AM
This topic is here to help people decide what to read next. so all aspiring authors give your name, title and a brief description of your book (see the blurb topic for ideas)
Shes been crying
and ive been thinking
and if your the queen of this town
then i am the king of the rain
Shes been crying
and ive been thinking
and if your the queen of this town
then i am the king of the rain
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Title: The Donkey-Boy
Description: “It’s a new strain.†Gloster told this to the donkey-boy and, eventually, the donkey-boy told me. “The Little Doctors made it specially.â€
Of course, while we know that it was the Little Doctors in the south who cooked up the fevers, we shouldn’t be surprised if their name meant nothing to the donkey-boy. He is a boy who walks through the world, seeing everything, but understanding little. He remembers the Red Fever, which took his mother and the Black Fever - he’d caught that one himself – but his father had told him the bastards sent the fevers, and it had always been the bastards that the donkey-boy had blamed.
A new strain?
None of them there, standing around the little phial, could see, yet, their ride to stop it, the silent Doctor who created it or the lonely queen who would, at last, use it.
Description: “It’s a new strain.†Gloster told this to the donkey-boy and, eventually, the donkey-boy told me. “The Little Doctors made it specially.â€
Of course, while we know that it was the Little Doctors in the south who cooked up the fevers, we shouldn’t be surprised if their name meant nothing to the donkey-boy. He is a boy who walks through the world, seeing everything, but understanding little. He remembers the Red Fever, which took his mother and the Black Fever - he’d caught that one himself – but his father had told him the bastards sent the fevers, and it had always been the bastards that the donkey-boy had blamed.
A new strain?
None of them there, standing around the little phial, could see, yet, their ride to stop it, the silent Doctor who created it or the lonely queen who would, at last, use it.
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Posted 23 March 2004 - 09:00 AM
And we never heard from Jachap again....------------------------------
The dead are like a silent, conquering army.
With every battle their ranks grow,
Marching, inexhaustible, each and every one,
Beneath crumbling stone banners. - The Call of Hurgana
Victory is mine!
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Posted 23 January 2004 - 07:37 AM
Book: Turnover (completed)
Description: Age old adversaries divide the continent of Europe. In the west, elves, dwarves and the other magical races live together with humans in a democratic but uneasy peace, further east ancient beliefs of human supremacy dictate government policy. The uneasy border between the two sides is the most militarised zone in the world. When all hell breaks loose Captain Andrew Stoke is caught up in political machinations that eventually make him the commander of the first all race unit in Britain. He must establish his position as commander and gain the unit’s respect while the threat of an imminent invasion looms over them all.
Book: War Among Ruins (the sequel)
Description: Britain has been invaded. Captain Stoke, commander of the first all races unit in the British army, must fight for survival in the devastated ruins of London. In the chaotic retreat from the war torn city he will make new allies, confront old foes and uncover treason within his own ranks. As the world around him goes to hell, Captain Stoke will have to use every resource at his disposal just to stay alive.
Basically, the books are set in a twisted 1930s world: where there's magic and elves, dwarves and advanced technology.
Description: Age old adversaries divide the continent of Europe. In the west, elves, dwarves and the other magical races live together with humans in a democratic but uneasy peace, further east ancient beliefs of human supremacy dictate government policy. The uneasy border between the two sides is the most militarised zone in the world. When all hell breaks loose Captain Andrew Stoke is caught up in political machinations that eventually make him the commander of the first all race unit in Britain. He must establish his position as commander and gain the unit’s respect while the threat of an imminent invasion looms over them all.
Book: War Among Ruins (the sequel)
Description: Britain has been invaded. Captain Stoke, commander of the first all races unit in the British army, must fight for survival in the devastated ruins of London. In the chaotic retreat from the war torn city he will make new allies, confront old foes and uncover treason within his own ranks. As the world around him goes to hell, Captain Stoke will have to use every resource at his disposal just to stay alive.
Basically, the books are set in a twisted 1930s world: where there's magic and elves, dwarves and advanced technology.
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Posted 29 December 2003 - 08:42 AM
Just saw a neat idea on Karsa and Solitude's thread thrown up by Solitude and I stole it!REVIEWS OF REQUEISCAT
"I really enjoyed it" – Pug
"Very good" – TheClaw
"Certainly the best stuff i've read on the forum." – The Shadowlord
"Must say you should be inspired more often so that we can see more of your exellent writing" – TheClaw
"I really hope you can find time to write, as I am enjoying this story more than I can tell you."
MediumPacedBen
"stop killing characters I like" – Pug
"In the future, when its published and a big success, we can all say we were the original fans!" - MPBen
"It's not the most interesting stuff I've read…But it's not boring either" – Monk
"Well written." – Zakari
"The image of crows plaguing the land is a wonderous one" - Malarion
"I'm guessing Pilgrim is going to have a part to play soon. Hope he gets suitably murdered" - Malarion
"Scorpions! very cool!" – Pug
"Love the scorpions! Love ‘em!" - MPBen
The dead are like a silent, conquering army.
With every battle their ranks grow,
Marching, inexhaustible, each and every one,
Beneath crumbling stone banners. - The Call of Hurgana
Victory is mine!
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Posted 09 November 2003 - 08:25 AM
Book: Bastion of light
Description: The kings and Queens are gone, the nations have burned and an Empire rose from their ashes like a pheonix, it was the dream burning with new ideas and hope. The people demanded a voice and it was given, the nobles demanded money and it was given. The sorcerers demanded it all and it was taken.
On a small trail, on the eastern fringe of the Empire a small company are tracking a traitor, and all that stands between him and them are a few hours and an elite unit of soldiers. He must die, but at the hand of the Empire or the rebellion, is yet to be decided.
It the midst of it all a young man, Rohel Du Monte, burns for revenge against a father he never knew. His dreams and his life were stolen when his father rebelled, but like the empire before him, from the ashes of the old he rose as new. He dreams now only of vengeance, and his dreams are within reach.
As the flame of the pheonix fade the shadows stir and people whisper of rebellion. The spies are in place, the rebels are becoming brave and Paarl Du Monte prepares his legions of liberation to march. The rebellion is poised to strike, but its future hangs in the balance on the life of one man and the dreams of another....
bastions of light is the first book in the exciting new fantasy series aspirations of pantheon
Shes been crying
and ive been thinking
and if your the queen of this town
then i am the king of the rain
Description: The kings and Queens are gone, the nations have burned and an Empire rose from their ashes like a pheonix, it was the dream burning with new ideas and hope. The people demanded a voice and it was given, the nobles demanded money and it was given. The sorcerers demanded it all and it was taken.
On a small trail, on the eastern fringe of the Empire a small company are tracking a traitor, and all that stands between him and them are a few hours and an elite unit of soldiers. He must die, but at the hand of the Empire or the rebellion, is yet to be decided.
It the midst of it all a young man, Rohel Du Monte, burns for revenge against a father he never knew. His dreams and his life were stolen when his father rebelled, but like the empire before him, from the ashes of the old he rose as new. He dreams now only of vengeance, and his dreams are within reach.
As the flame of the pheonix fade the shadows stir and people whisper of rebellion. The spies are in place, the rebels are becoming brave and Paarl Du Monte prepares his legions of liberation to march. The rebellion is poised to strike, but its future hangs in the balance on the life of one man and the dreams of another....
bastions of light is the first book in the exciting new fantasy series aspirations of pantheon
Shes been crying
and ive been thinking
and if your the queen of this town
then i am the king of the rain
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Posted 05 January 2004 - 10:36 AM
Well, if Gamet can sell his book, why can't I?
Comments on Book 2 - Champions of Carnage
"i liked it...very good" - Fortrip
"Those wraiths are chilling!" - Zakari
"The birth of the Vorcan was really cool, didn’t see it coming! - Fist Gamet
"very good and if you were after impact, it hit me like a speeding car" - PUG
"I sense more brutality and bloodshed and the banishment of hope coming in this book" - Fist Gamet
"This flowed very well, i got into the story, so much so that i didnt realise how much id read" - Fortrip
"very good discourse between the characters as always" - Fist Gamet
Hehe...that was kind of fun.
Where once was light
Now darkness falls
Where once was love
Love is no more
Comments on Book 2 - Champions of Carnage
"i liked it...very good" - Fortrip
"Those wraiths are chilling!" - Zakari
"The birth of the Vorcan was really cool, didn’t see it coming! - Fist Gamet
"very good and if you were after impact, it hit me like a speeding car" - PUG
"I sense more brutality and bloodshed and the banishment of hope coming in this book" - Fist Gamet
"This flowed very well, i got into the story, so much so that i didnt realise how much id read" - Fortrip
"very good discourse between the characters as always" - Fist Gamet
Hehe...that was kind of fun.
Where once was light
Now darkness falls
Where once was love
Love is no more
Grumpy is only my middle name.
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