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#1 Corporal Nobbs

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Posted 14 April 2009 - 04:55 PM

Kallor.
Needs to be angrier or something, I think.

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#2 Aptorian

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Posted 14 April 2009 - 05:03 PM

Not neccessarily anger, more like venom, arrogance, spite... extreme dissatisfaction with his surroundings. His skin is grey with age and chemical use, and weathered like old shoeleather. I think the hair needs to be longer aswell. His hair is long, isn't it?

Still, a nice picture, I imagine that could also be Fisher.

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Posted 14 April 2009 - 08:48 PM

Corporal Nobbs, on Apr 14 2009, 09:55 AM, said:

Kallor.
Needs to be angrier or something, I think.
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Holy shit man, absolutely amazing, first of all.

Second, I agree with Apt. He's not so much an angry character and he is a character that is full of spite, hatred and a very... poisonous/venomous attitude. I would suggest longer hair, I love how old he looks, it seems perfect to me, and more of a frown or pronounced look of disgust/displeasure on his face.

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Posted 14 April 2009 - 11:52 PM

Needs to be more ragged, hair wise.
I'd make the hair gray, kinda greasy/lank.

Agre with others, would look better with a sneer of contempt or something like that, and skin needs to look deader, less full of life.

Still an awesome picture though

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Posted 15 April 2009 - 12:07 AM

Fantastic pic

Looks a bit like Terrance Stamp, who would be awesome in the "movie", if he was a foot taller !

I think he's supposed to have longer, manky hair and be more pale and crusty looking ?

Regardless, this is a epic pic, congrats !

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Posted 15 April 2009 - 02:30 AM

This was the original... before I started messin' around with it.
Which do you prefer?

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#7 Aptorian

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Posted 15 April 2009 - 03:37 AM

Better. The other one is too vibrant.

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Posted 15 April 2009 - 05:47 AM

I liked the old ones vibrancy. Atleast in the background and whatnot. I would suggest keeping the background the same vibrant colour and leaving his face the faded grey that you have on the revised version.

Also, with the hair, I would have it a lot more unkempt, not so neatly to the back, and of course, a more contemptuous look on the face.

That's me though, you sir, are the artist. Keep it up!

I still heart Goodkind.

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Posted 15 April 2009 - 06:15 AM

Not wrinkly enough....since when did Kallor have a tan?

EDIT: The new one: much better.

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Posted 15 April 2009 - 06:49 AM

That's a great pic - looks more like how I would expect Banaschar to look though - Kallor looks much older with long grey hair

But I like it a lot - a very great deal in fact.

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Posted 15 April 2009 - 06:51 AM

Really good portrait.

He does look too nice to be Kallor though! Revising a pic is hard - but maybe deeper lines around his face, and a more 'grizzled' jaw would make him look a bit meaner. The highlight on his throat seems a little too distracting, like something attached to his chin - it could be toned down a bit.

I really like the picture, I don't know how to use texture like that.

He does look a bit like Fisher...

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Posted 15 April 2009 - 07:38 AM

Traveller, on Apr 15 2009, 04:51 PM, said:

I really like the picture, I don't know how to use texture like that.
He does look a bit like Fisher...

The texture is just the brushes I use.
Just a bristley acrylic and blender.
I like keeping it rough. Anytime I try to polish things up , it looks lame.

Yeah... when I finished, I knew it didn't look right for Kallor, but I thought I'd post it anyway

edit... fixed highlight on neck

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#13 Sindriss

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Posted 15 April 2009 - 09:47 AM

If you could give him a bit more arrogance in his expression it would be perfect!

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Posted 15 April 2009 - 12:53 PM

nice portrait, cool style:)

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Posted 17 April 2009 - 05:40 PM

Kallor
'New and Improved'

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#16 Aptorian

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Posted 17 April 2009 - 05:50 PM

Looks like Clint Eastwood now...

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Posted 17 April 2009 - 06:02 PM

Well, I've always thought that Kallor looked like Clint but with longer hair.

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#18 Assail

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Posted 17 April 2009 - 09:30 PM

Corporal Nobbs, on Apr 17 2009, 10:40 AM, said:

Kallor
'New and Improved'
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I like how you made him look nastier but he seems kind of deformed now haha.

I still heart Goodkind.

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Posted 17 April 2009 - 11:43 PM

I like the second pic the best. I do agree he should have longer hair though. To me he looks kinda like Malcolm McDowell (sp?) Great job though. Are you on a site we could check out more of your stuff?