QuickTidal, on 08 June 2013 - 12:23 PM, said:
1. I thought that Tregillis pulls it off to a degree more than O'Malley. But at least it's not like Paul Cornell, whose LONDON FALLING is a near incomprehensible British slang book that alienates the rest of the world by being TOO British.
tbh I disagree. Both are equally guilty, from what I can see, of having British characters speak in the idiom of the author - O'Malley is Australian, Tregillis is Canadian iirc. And I'm not actually referring to slang or vocabulary; but they also matter too - grammatical construction is an area where British English can be quite different from the Englishes spoken in the Commonwealth (which tend to be more influenced by American English). In Tregillis' case it's possibly even more egregious imo, because some of his characters are Brits of the 40s, 50s, and 60s, who would speak nothing like the way he has them speak; they would sound quite different to even Modern Brits.
For example: both Tregillis and O'Malley use the construction: go [verb] a/the [noun]". This is a particular
bete noir of mine (although I have been accused of being a "precious snowflake" in such matters) because
no one ever uses that particular construction here; we say "go and..." Such things stick out like a sore thumb. Arguably this may be a result of editing, but I doubt it.
It works both ways for me btw, I get annoyed when British writers write Americans or Canadians or Australians or what have you that sound like Brits; it's a matter of having control of your register.
Given that Paul Cornell is British, I think he gets a pass on writing Brits that actually sound like Brits - even if they do sound like Southern Jessies...
This post has been edited by stone monkey: 09 June 2013 - 11:21 AM
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