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The Long Price: Shadow and Betrayal by Daniel Abraham

#1 User is offline   Werthead 

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Posted 31 October 2007 - 04:12 PM

Review now up on the blog:

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A brief moment of explanation here. The Long Price Quartet is a fantasy series by Daniel Abraham published in four volumes in the United States: A Shadow in Summer (2006), A Betrayal in Winter (2007) and the forthcoming The Autumn War and The Price of Spring (both already completed and handed into the publisher). However, for the UK edition Orbit seems to be publishing them in two-volume editions, so Shadow and Betrayal combines the first two novels in one volume.

The world is in a state of flux. The old Empire has fallen and the new upstart nation of Galt is flexing its muscles, making inroads on three continents. Yet the city-states of the Khaiem are not concerned. They wield the power of the andat, concepts and ideas that through the magic of those known as poets are given humanoid form and wield tremendous power, enough to give the rulers of Galt pause. To be a poet is one of the most prestigious jobs it is possible to achieve, but for every one who makes it many drop out in their training. A very promising young poet-to-be named Otah learns some unpalatable truths about his destiny and disappears during training, but leaves a vivid impression on another student, Maati. Many years later their paths cross in the fabled city of Saraykeht as they confront a dark conspiracy that could shatter the power of the Khaiem and cost one man his soul and self-respect.

Daniel Abraham's debut two novels are a tremendous breath of fresh air in the fantasy genre. Abraham hasn't gained as much attention as some other high-profile recent debuts (Abercrombie, Lynch and Rothfuss in particular), possibly as his European debut has some some time after his American, but hopefully this will be rectified. These two books are inventive, clever and possess a strong moral core. That Abraham attended writing courses led by George R.R. Martin should come as no surprise, but echoes of other fantasists (particularly the emotional resonance of Guy Gavriel Kay) can be detected as well in his work. His characters are deeply flawed and human, but also utterly convincing in motivation and deed. His fantasy landscape is well-realised, with summer-blessed Saraykeht and cold, distant Machi becoming as much characters as any of the humans (or magical andat) in the tales.

An area where Abraham wins out is his description of hierarchy. A lot of fantasy writers decide to have their heroes in a feudal society come to some pretty radical ideas (equal rights between the sexes, universal sufferage, even republicanism) very quickly, possibly out of fear that they'll be seen as endorsing feudalism or serfdom if they don't. Abraham doesn't do this. His is a world of rigid hierarchal layers with each person fitting into their allotted place, underlined by an alternate method of communication which relies on poses and hand-signals. When one character does start to question how his world does things, it is as logical development of his background and his upbringing.

Are there flaws? Some. The underlying 'threat' in both books is pretty similar and it could be argued that Betrayal is somewhat of a rewrite of Shadow but in a different season and setting. However, the emotional cost to the characters is much greater in the second volume and its ending propels the series onto a different tack altogether. Another potential problem for readers is that Abraham adopts a Columbo-like approach to the story, giving us both the protagonist and antagonists' point-of-view so that the reader is (mostly) in full knowledge of all aspects of the plot. This is an idea I haven't seen pursued in SF&F much and I found it quite intriguing, but I can see some complaining that it reduces tension. Another problem is a fault of the publisher, not the author, and that is that the sudden twelve-odd year leap forward between the two books is a bit jarring.

The Long Price: Shadow and Betrayal (****) is a superb, resonant story that catches the attention and engages both the intellect and heart.

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Posted 21 December 2007 - 07:01 AM

After reading your review a few weeks ago, I ordered the book (the "Shadow and Betrayal" omnibus) and finished it today. And I loved it.

I don't have much to add; I agree with you on most points. The concept of andats, personified ideas, was indeed original and intriguing, and I loved the way Abraham portrays the relations between the poets and their creations (or, to a certain degree, their mirrored selves). Also, the rules of social interaction, that demand strictly defined forms and extreme subtlety at the same time , gave his world an original touch. (It's only a guess, but I have a feeling that to a certain extent he used some elements from the old Chinese Empire as a model for his social system.)

Regarding you remark that the underlying "threat" in both books was similar: yes, it was, but I didn't consider it to be a "rewriting" of the original idea, but rather the continuation of the same. For me, it was like a thread in the plot that hasn't been resolved yet, and I expect it to be present in the following two books as well. And about the Columbo-like detective story in the second book... No, I don't think it reduces the tension. It was well done, it served its purpose of giving us deeper insight into characters and their motives. An alternative would have been an Agatha-Christie-like approach (was it the gardener or the butler...?) but I don't think that solution would have been fitting for the story.

All in all, it is a wonderful book, and I'm eagerly looking forward to the rest of the series. Thank you very much for recommending it! B)
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Posted 21 December 2007 - 07:55 AM

Sounds really good! And if they're publishing it only in the omnibus, does that mean it's happily cheap? B)
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Posted 21 December 2007 - 08:43 AM

I've read the first book so far...found it to be a good read.

Now I'm really looking forward to the next one!
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Posted 21 December 2007 - 03:10 PM

Books 1 and 2 are out now, seperately, in the USA under the titles A Shadow in Summer and A Betrayal in Winter. They are published by Tor. Book 3, The Autumn War, is out next summer.

In the UK Books 1 and 2 are published in one volume called The Long Price: Shadow and Betrayal. It's the same price as a regular trade paperback, but given that the two books are only about 350 pages long each, it's about the same size as a normal one as well. Since it's fantastic, however, it's well worth the money B)
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Posted 21 December 2007 - 04:33 PM

columbo? im there dude
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Posted 28 December 2007 - 06:04 PM

Well, bought this today, looking forward to starting it:)
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Posted 29 December 2007 - 12:54 AM

I read this a few weeks ago, enjoyed it muchly. It's not as epic as the blurbs and that might lead you to believe, it's very much two small, personal stories. Focuses very much on the people and the machinations involved.

I don't think the books are as similar as has been implied (not just by Wert); the structure is, yes, but the details of the plots are different enough that it becomes a different thing. The first story is in my opinion the stronger though. I connected with the characters more, and the main antagonist is more involving.

I didn't mind the time-jump, though that might have been because I knew it was coming.

Edit: oh, one tip for people who are planning to read the British edition. Don't go and find the start of the second book before reading the first. The ending is much less predictable if you don't know exactly how long you've got left of the story, and I think it'd be better for that.
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