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Recently rejected by Tor Publishing! Yay!
I wrote this in August, and was hoping to share it after publishing somewhere, but I figure this is a great and small community to share it with.
Thoughts? Likes? Dislikes? How'd you feel?
I wrote it after having that end epiphany when I met my "Nicole Brandt". Tried to keep the style really simplistic in a child like way and to emphasize that idea of imperfection. It was really hard not to re-write and re-write.
Hope you like it!
The Painting of Jimmy Burnham
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The Painting of Jimmy Burnham
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Posted 26 March 2014 - 07:27 PM
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Posted 26 March 2014 - 08:08 PM
I thought this was pretty good over all. Could you clarify who the three portaitees in the following quote are: "The three portraits were released simultaneously" (are they specified in the text or not).
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Posted 26 March 2014 - 08:17 PM
D, on 26 March 2014 - 08:08 PM, said:
I thought this was pretty good over all. Could you clarify who the three portaitees in the following quote are: "The three portraits were released simultaneously" (are they specified in the text or not).
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Those portraits were not specified in the text. Even though there are many great opportunities for portrait stories to be written about, I thought that since in that moment he is selling his soul, it'd be more eerie not to know who they are, or what the situation was like.
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