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The VERY short story thread, 3rd challenge up deadline - 25th october

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Posted 06 March 2013 - 08:05 PM

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Welcome to the Story-tellers' tattered old home
Please sit and enjoy as you read this old tome

In here are now kept, the work of friends dear
join in and leave behind a laugh or a tear

Should you endeavour, a short story to attempt
Please step downto yon celler, and watch your first step...

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The Premise is simple, one of the following is deceided:

An opening line, An ending line or a core theme for a story,

People who want to participate under this topic submit a story to The Bard via PM, then post in the discussion thread that they've entered.
After a Month or two (depending on entries) we'll post all the stories and see what directions people went with what they were given and offer critiques to each other to aid in our development and all that stuff.




Current Theme:

ETERNITY



- (no set word limit, but a short story)


full description (by Dolmen)

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Posted 30 April 2013 - 01:07 PM

Spoiler



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2 entries, spoileered to avoid wall of texting.

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Posted 09 May 2013 - 04:51 AM

Second Round

Any one wishing to take part must submit a story of roughly 1000 woulds containing the sentence
We're going to need a doctor


Submit via PM to The Bard



only one entry



Spoiler





discussion on the submissions starts HERE

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Posted 05 October 2013 - 05:15 PM

the 3rd challenge has been posted by Dolmen

He has set the challenge of writing a short story (no set limit on words) on the theme of Birth

full description



All submissions to be PM'd to Me (The Bard) by October 25th, midnight GMT
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Posted 28 October 2013 - 10:25 PM

only 2 entries for the third challenge

Hiidenkiuas


By Kaamos



Sleet plummeted down from the inky sky, great wet rags that smashed into the ice-crusted ground with a small splat. The windscreen wipers of the stagnant bus squeaked, and turned the slosh into a gray smear across the front window. The snake of road lights vanishing into the gray curtain of the downpour and rising mist seemed to cower beneath the displeasure of the elements, soggy halos wavering around the pallid bulbs, impotent to deliver proper illumination into the night....

Spoiler



Birth of a Prince

The woman screamed.A primal roar torn from her throat by the agony that ripped through her stomach.
"And again my Queen!"
The Queen fought back a curse as she panted and braced herself for anotherpush, "how," she heaved in another breath, "how much more?"
"Not long, it's crowning, deep breathes, you can do this"
Jaseta squeezed her eyes shut and pushed again.
"one more! you can do this"
...

Spoiler




Discussion of the stories starts Here

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Posted 06 July 2014 - 05:26 PM


4th Topic: Hate


Definition: Wikia Dictionary.com

Hatred (or hate) is a deep and emotional extreme dislike. It can be directed against individuals, entities, objects, or ideas. Hatred is often associated with feelings of anger and a disposition towards hostility.


Setting: Story as told from the perspective of two characters.The bulk of the story must happen within the confines of one room. Story must address the issue of hatred as per definition.

Word-limit: Null

Deadline: Sunday 13. 20th July 2014

Submissions to be sent to THE BARD by 12:00 midnight GMT

More info Here: Discussion

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Title: Untitled

Author: Kaamos

Contains language, gore, and violence

A waning moon; a time of endings. The thin silvery sliver gleamed in the depths of the heavens, its graceful, curving edge whetted to cut the fabric of the air. Still it ascended towards its highest declination, like its tinier, terrene kinsman had done moments ago. Through the dissipating haze of wrath still obscuring her thoughts, Linda could imagine some obscure sky-titan, draped in the deepest midnight, awaiting in ambush beyond the stars, only this single sickle manifesting his existence. Or her existence....
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Title: Jangled
Author: Dolmen
Contains: Violence

The door key turned and the lock unlatched. A middle aged man walked into his up-market studio apartment. He wore dark slacks and a blazer with a black throat hugger underneath. His hair was combed back and held fast with gel, his leather shoes clacked rhythmically on the ceramic floor tiles. The man moved slowly, his expression morose, the events of the day weighing heavily on his shoulders. The man de-activated his security and switched on his phone. Sifting through apologetic E-mails and messages he made his way to the kitchen. He'd neglected to eat through the course of the day. He knew he had to have something but the will for it was gone. As he stepped into the open kitchen he realized, somewhat belatedly, that the sun was setting, the shadows graduating to night. He looked around the dark interior, his hands groping for the light switch. A flick and the fluorescent lighting came on. When he saw what lay on the counter next to him he froze...
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Posted 20 July 2014 - 09:27 PM


5th Topic: Triumph


Definition: Triumph (Roman) Dictionary.com

Triumph is a significant success or noteworthy achievement; an instance or occasion of victory. The word Stems from the Roman celebration of victorious returns.
Setting: Story must involve an army after a victorious return. Look into the contrast of an officers welcome to that of a simple infantryman.

Word-limit: null

Deadline: Sunday 10 August 2014 (Not quite...)

Submissions to be sent to THE BARD by 12:00 midnight GMT

More info Here: Discussion

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Otsomieli's Choice


Iceland, 11th century


Gelid rain lashed down from the inky sky, goaded into further ferocity by a wind so violent it had uprooted smaller plants from the ever-thinning topsoil. On occasion, one could spot a malnourished bush that had tried, oh, had tried to hard to cling to life, but which had at last bent beneath the perpetual gale's iron will.Such had become the legacy of the invaders: the great, tangled birch woods of yore had nigh-on vanished, chopped down and become fashioned into grand dragon-headed ships or burnt to feed the forges wherein iron transformed into keen swords. Nowadays, the tortured shapes of laval rocks oftentimes dominated the sites of the bygone forests, with perhaps thin moss covering them or some scraggly weeds sticking out from hollows where fertile mold still persisted.

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Posted 25 October 2014 - 06:22 AM

6th Topic: ETERNITY

Definition: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Eternity

...Eternity is endless time. In philosophy and mathematics, an infinite duration is also called sempiternity, or everlasting.Eternity is an important concept in many religions, where the immortality of God or the gods is said to endure eternally. Some, such as Aristotle, would say the same about the natural cosmos in regard to both past and future eternal duration, and like the eternal Platonic Forms, immutability was considered essential.


The metaphysics of eternity studies that which necessarily exists outside or independently of space and time.Another important question is whether "information"or Form is separable from mind and matter. Aristotle established a distinction between actual infinity and a potentially infinite count: a future span of time must be a potential infinity,because another element can always be added to a series that is inexhaustible.[2] Aristotle likewise argued that the cosmos has no beginning. Euclid invoked this distinction instead of saying that there are an infinity of primes, rather that the primes outnumber those contained in any given collection thereof.



Setting: Compose a "glimpse" of eternity.

Word-limit: null

Deadline: Mid January

Submissions to be sent to THE BARD
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