[langlys]

Did this one today, maybe I will work more on it later on, maybe not

I wanted to picture the last league of the 14th army's march on the whirlwind. The 4 persons on the rise are supposed to be T'Amber, Tavore, Nil and Nether.

Hope you like it

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[Abyss]

I like a lot!
Nice sense of foreboding and i like the light/dark effect of the whirlwind wall. The overall darkness of the frame conveys a good sense of dread. The banner is a nice touch.

Don't know if you want to spend any time individualizing some of the soldiers... they are all very uniform in helmet, height and silhouette and it totally works as is, but could also work with more detail.

The hooded figure at the back of the group of four doesn't really scream 'T'amber'. I can't remember her ever actually stepping out of the tent 'on screen' during the march and any time we did see her she was in dueling armour with sword, not cloak.

What i do like about that figure is that it puts Tavore's relative 'smallness' in context, especially with the two child shamans standing next to her.

[Grimjust Bearegular]

Nicely done!

I also agree with Abyss about the armor. They seemed to just use whatever they found along the way, so some more detail would be nice

[langlys]

Thanks for your comments, all valid points I will take into consideration if I ever get back to it

[Sibylle]

nicely done! I really like it, although it begs for even more detail. Can you make it a scene were you just keep looking at and keep seeing new things please ;P ?

[Overactive Imagination]

Sick.