Posted 16 August 2011 - 12:34 AM
God, I had a lot - and I mean a LOT - of trouble with mine, not least was it not looking even vaguely competent or interesting. Then I reread this thread and saw the 500ish word limit and I cut a good half out and that made things easier. Sure, I just added it back in, but that was after I rewrote what I had kept to not be absolutely terrible. Just terrible. Oh, and if we're after names of competitors call mine Symphony.
Hello, soldiers, look at your mage, now back to me, now back at your mage, now back to me. Sadly, he isn’t me, but if he stopped being an unascended mortal and switched to Sole Spice, he could smell like he’s me. Look down, back up, where are you? You’re in a warren with the High Mage your cadre mage could smell like. What’s in your hand, back at me. I have it, it’s an acorn with two gates to that realm you love. Look again, the acorn is now otataral. Anything is possible when your mage smells like Sole Spice and not a Bole brother. I’m on a quorl.