Malazan Empire: Looking for some feedback on my writing... - Malazan Empire

Hello all,

I am new to this board but have read all the stories that have been posted. I must say, some very good writing here. I do not think my own stacks up against some that I have read here, but I would like your feedback all the same. I, like many of you, would love to publish a fantasy series someday.

A note about my writing, I have introduced the main characters so far, this is totally unedited and the order of events will most likely change once I have more down!

Hope you enjoy =)