[Chaos]

hehe. well i FINALLY have had time to finish chapter 1. i posted the prologue AGES ago and then i have just been in the schedule from hell.
but here it is.
I have also included the prologue again in the file.

Any comments would be very much appreciated, constructive or not.
I have only slightly edited it, i do know that there are certain aspects i need to deal with, grammar etc. But if you see something mention it, i know i have a lot to learn and your comments could help me. Thanks

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I hold on and you give me strength, you give me hope, you give me life.